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AN UNHIDDEN REALITY

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Below is the poem entitled AN UNHIDDEN REALITY which was written by poet Fatima Hasan Zaidi. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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AN UNHIDDEN REALITY

I hate my deeds & 
everbody hates me
It's a fact and I know it
I am a burden so heavy 
I am a curse so dark
I am a person , i'hv bones
Not just a reason to 
throw stones

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  1. Date: 4/19/2013 4:34:00 PM
    Dear Fatima, Oh! my dear, I can not believe YOUR deeds were bad enough to be hated so.I have only read 3 of YOUR POEMS and I do not see any evil in YOU.Be kinder to YOUR self. YOUR first 2 POEMS were of LOVE and Respect,Therefore this Write is a falacy.YOU are a Welcomed addition to the POETRYSOUP Family. Fill YOUR Pen with LOVE.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

    Zaidi Avatar Fatima Hasan Zaidi
    Date: 4/21/2013 11:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i will do what ever u will say u made me so happy, my deeds as a student i do not gt good marks sometimes my behavior due to which i m scolded by mama.