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RETURN OF THE STORK

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RETURN OF THE STORK

Your Stork, is his creation
Perching upon your abdomen
In chase of vultures,  
Breaking into a flock of doves,
As they descend towards purity
Selah...

Upon their wings, an unearthed
Soul
Migrating towards the cracked sky,
The doorway to heavens dimension
Where the Son has risen
Selah...

A smile so touching
God afforded it, depositing it
Into the kingdom where 
angels rejoice,
Their new trainee
Selah...

Windows to the soul
               Sealed,
Never viewing landscapes of hardship,
               
Opening new windows
            Where love is Agape,
Bosoms lactate wisdom
        Nurturing the sibling lamb,
Until flight with the flock
Selah...

Dedicated to Sebastian Madrigal

Scribe Marlon Linton

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  1. Date: 7/3/2013 9:25:00 PM
    Breaking into flocks of doves....wow! My mind soars! Amazing art! Marlon! And thanks for your kind words! jimbo

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 1:26:00 PM
    Selah - The creator speaks. Words in silent poetic rhetoric. Good job!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 7:46:00 AM
    Hola; como estas? I hope well with your family. This is a beautiful poem and a great dedication. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 9:55:00 AM
    windows to the soul sealed, just one of many classic lines here,,i do really like this poem...

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 2:14:00 PM
    This great composition invokes beliefs in reincarnation for me Scribe - expert imagery, expert soul shine - stunning combination of motion, sight, and concept - I really like the angels and trainee thought - Bravo! J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 7:36:00 PM
    Angelic....

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 2:52:00 PM
    Scribe a wonderful skill full write...David

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 4:15:00 PM
    this is one awesome dedication. I really like how you did this one. Loved the imagery of the lamb and the nice repetitions in this one, Skat.

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 2:20:00 PM
    Nice dedication, Marlon. Have a Happy Easter with your loved ones!

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 8:47:00 AM
    Lovely dedication...very sad!!! Happy Easter fam!!

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    Date: 3/31/2013 9:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Happy Easter Fam..Thanks!
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 7:34:00 AM
    Thank you for your wonderful comment on my poem, what can I say but this is a brilliant poem nice to meet you I have been away for a quite a while sincerely Jayne

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    Date: 3/31/2013 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks!
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 3:45:00 AM
    Beautiful, Marlon! jimbo

    WRITER Avatar NOVICE WRITER
    Date: 3/31/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jimbo!
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 8:03:00 PM
    A good piece

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    Date: 3/30/2013 9:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks poet!
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 7:13:00 PM
    well written Dedication Scribe....I like the metaphors describing the journey of the soul...thanks for stopping by

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    Date: 3/30/2013 7:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joseph!
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Marlon, Special work here, I hope PD gets to see this because it speaks to their loss ( I know or think it inspired you ) because it's perfect and the way you formed the words makes it perfect to read. Faving this Marlin!!

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    Date: 3/30/2013 5:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Craig..a friend of mine dealt this. I escorted him to the services, and I never seen anything more nerve racking than a child at rest!
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 2:59:00 PM
    I like this... it's quite beautiful in it's struture and words and I'm sure many can relate to the content. Such a lovely dedication this is !!

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    Date: 3/30/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debra! A reflection of Gods grace from a different angle!
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 2:10:00 PM
    - A talented poem, Marlon - It is beautiful and inquisitive. - Heaven's angels sing for joy. - Happy Easter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 3/30/2013 3:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne...Happy Easter!