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  1. Date: 9/17/2013 6:25:00 PM
    I remember this one, Keith, :-(... I don't know why I got all teary:-( sorry.. I felt sad reading this one again.. :-(.. luv~ Linda

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    Date: 9/17/2013 6:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    The saddest thing I've written, by far! I'm sorry, Linda!
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 9:25:00 PM
    Breaking into flocks of doves....wow! My mind soars! Amazing art! Marlon! And thanks for your kind words! jimbo

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 1:26:00 PM
    Selah - The creator speaks. Words in silent poetic rhetoric. Good job!

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 7:46:00 AM
    Hola; como estas? I hope well with your family. This is a beautiful poem and a great dedication. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 9:55:00 AM
    windows to the soul sealed, just one of many classic lines here,,i do really like this poem...

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 2:14:00 PM
    This great composition invokes beliefs in reincarnation for me Scribe - expert imagery, expert soul shine - stunning combination of motion, sight, and concept - I really like the angels and trainee thought - Bravo! J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 7:36:00 PM
    Angelic....

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 2:52:00 PM
    Scribe a wonderful skill full write...David

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 4:15:00 PM
    this is one awesome dedication. I really like how you did this one. Loved the imagery of the lamb and the nice repetitions in this one, Skat.

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 2:20:00 PM
    Nice dedication, Marlon. Have a Happy Easter with your loved ones!

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 8:47:00 AM
    Lovely dedication...very sad!!! Happy Easter fam!!

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    Date: 3/31/2013 9:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Happy Easter Fam..Thanks!
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 7:34:00 AM
    Thank you for your wonderful comment on my poem, what can I say but this is a brilliant poem nice to meet you I have been away for a quite a while sincerely Jayne

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    Date: 3/31/2013 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks!
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 3:45:00 AM
    Beautiful, Marlon! jimbo

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    Date: 3/31/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jimbo!
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 8:03:00 PM
    A good piece

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    Date: 3/30/2013 9:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks poet!
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 7:13:00 PM
    well written Dedication Scribe....I like the metaphors describing the journey of the soul...thanks for stopping by

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    Date: 3/30/2013 7:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joseph!
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 5:17:00 PM
    Dear Scribe, a heartfelt dedication, somehow I feel the connection and message in your poem. :-( In time I will tell my daughter to read your poem. "Return of the stork." Marlon, I know you are a man of passion and can share some words of comfort. My daughter Royal, posted a poem last night Called "ANGEL WINGS" would you like to read her poem. You will find the poem under her name on the soup. ( Royal Trevino ). Always, your friend the lost poet.~LINDA

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    Date: 3/30/2013 5:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I pray for you guys...I've been through this with my friend. In time it will heal! Take care!
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Marlon, Special work here, I hope PD gets to see this because it speaks to their loss ( I know or think it inspired you ) because it's perfect and the way you formed the words makes it perfect to read. Faving this Marlin!!

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    Date: 3/30/2013 5:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Craig..a friend of mine dealt this. I escorted him to the services, and I never seen anything more nerve racking than a child at rest!
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 2:59:00 PM
    I like this... it's quite beautiful in it's struture and words and I'm sure many can relate to the content. Such a lovely dedication this is !!

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    Date: 3/30/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debra! A reflection of Gods grace from a different angle!
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 2:10:00 PM
    - A talented poem, Marlon - It is beautiful and inquisitive. - Heaven's angels sing for joy. - Happy Easter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 3/30/2013 3:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne...Happy Easter!