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The lost soul

 The lost soul
-- S.I.Khan

Let him know, the slow besprinkling of my life
I was completely drenched with his love in rife...
His existence meant heavens to me
Let him know, I’ll be no more without him, to strife

It’s hard to pass lonely days in lights so dim
Even harder to spent nights lost in dreams of him
Calling out his name aloud or presenting him with a visit...
Are the days seems nowhere to return, yet alive in me..., tell him!

Still if he doesn't wanna be a part of me, in me...around me...
My lad let him know the grave I’m going thru, gruesome cries I make...
Tell him, I’m letting him win all the wins he couldn't take
And accepting defeat for him 
...in every face of life...
Let him know, I lost ...lost his love...my life ...my soul 
And I’m no more...

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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 6:39:00 AM
    ... you are young and beautiful ..... live your life every day! - (I give you spring in my last poem) - A very well written poem my new friend Saba! - Have a beautiful day, smile .. the day it is yours! ("just a poem") - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    khan Avatar saba khan
    Date: 3/31/2013 7:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Anne...indeed life's very beautiful .. worth living everyday with new ways, new feel and zeal.. :x
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 6:22:00 AM
    Take it easy my dear.While there is life there is still hope. Nice piece

    khan Avatar saba khan
    Date: 3/31/2013 6:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for your comment Christine...but it's just a poem :) i appreciate your concern.