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  1. Date: 9/6/2013 9:37:00 AM

    ha ha.. I was kidding it is good enough.. LOL...<----- don't mean it in a bad way :-) thanks for the hi.. Linda

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 11:59:00 AM

    Marlon, colorful drama,explicit images. Interesting ideas. You have them all in one poem. Allan

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 10:04:00 AM

    as my dad used to say "yeah though I walk through the valley of the shadow I shall fear no evil, for I am the evilest mf in the valley" cool write

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 10:03:00 AM

    as my dad used to say "yeah though I walk through the valley of the shadow I shall fear no evil, for I am the evilest mf in the valley" cool write

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 6:38:00 PM

    They've complicated simplicity. No walls needed for bookshelves of laws. All we need are ten and the world will be fine. I sometimes wonder if I'll be in a much warmer climate come judgment day. If so, i'm sure I'll be surprised at the people I'll run into. God Bless.

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 10:02:00 AM

    You get a 7 for this one. Everything you say here is the truth. There are a lot of them all around. i met one of those once. He told us - we were all going to Hell, but he already had his place in heaven. That's when some of us stoped going. Great poem . Thanks for reading my poem. Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 12:43:00 PM

    I liked this very much and you are so good at this, the Holy Spirit be with you always, thanks for the comments on my poetry it is appreciated. Keep the poems and juices flowing you are good with this form to able to show this to someone is amazing in itself. God bless Sharon and Bob

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 12:41:00 PM

    I liked this very much and you are so good at this, the Holy Spirit be with you always, thanks for the comments on my poetry it is appreciated. Keep the poems and juices flowing you are good with this form to able to show this to someone is amazing in itself. God bless Sharon and Bob

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 6:28:00 PM

    Awesome-Skat

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 3:17:00 PM

    Hello Scribe...I love the title and all in your poem*<3 Congratulations with your wonderful and awesome poem. Sending small simple smiles all over the soup. Love-Linda

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 8:31:00 AM

    I am not surprised to see this among the winning poems........a perfect subject of evil lurking in disguise. Congrats to you!

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 3:22:00 PM

    wow, nicely done and nicely won, Scribe! Big congrats to you.

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    Thanks for the congrats and visit poet. It's appreciated!
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 8:41:00 AM

    congrats on a great win Scribe

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 4/1/2013 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joseph, it's appreciated poet!
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 6:30:00 AM

    So proud for you on this wonderful win....Donna

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 4/1/2013 8:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the support! I appreciate you!
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 5:37:00 AM

    I've just been through this very scenario Marlon; sure shakes a body up when you find you've been taken. Amazing I should find this as It strikes a chord. Love, Lizzie

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 4/1/2013 8:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's not right....I hope all is well Lizzie!
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 3:09:00 AM

    Congrats on your win~ A.O

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 4/1/2013 8:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, it is appreciated!
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 8:26:00 PM

    YIhaaa!!! 1st place! Congrats!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 4/1/2013 8:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Im excited also!
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 11:10:00 AM

    Congrats my dear, I felt it was a winner the first time I read it, your a versatile writer with a penchant for the good, the awesome and the beautiful, my love to you at Easter time and always xxx ps let me know when you want to partner up and write a poem

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 4/1/2013 8:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks and we most definitely will!
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 9:51:00 AM

    Powerful write, hit it on the nail. Congrats on your win. Rick

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 3/31/2013 9:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Rick, the contest it's still going!
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 9:49:00 AM

    There is nothing more sinister than the scammer preacher who takes advantage of those who think they are following the will of God.......! This is a perfect example of evil and sinister !! Awesome poem subject for the contest!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 3/31/2013 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your comment ended up on Carrie's comment...One Love!
    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 3/31/2013 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Carrie I do appreciate out. Happy Easter!
    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 3/31/2013 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Fam...the best, I don't know about that, but I'm in pursuit to be good one day! Flame on!
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 8:43:00 AM

    Wow fam, this is very explosive!!! You're the best fam...regards..your fan!!! Keep burning!!

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 7:47:00 AM

    An interesting write, I know it wasn't about happiness, but I gotta say it is an entertaining poem. You served it well, thanks for stopping by.

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    Thanks Poet!
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 3:36:00 PM

    Amazing truths, and oh boy dont we need poets like you Marlon.... the exposure of evil. which so cleverly Masquerade in sheep's clothing, so rife today, the rape of innocence minds so rife and one can go on and on,,,, there are a handful of amazing poets here, that do write and expose. this,, you being one of those...thank you...

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 3/31/2013 9:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's sad, but people takes their eyes off God and focus on man..Thanks Harry!
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 3:01:00 PM

    Couldn't of said it better, raised catholic, I met those wolves. I could go on, "but" You have a blessed Easter Sunday ;}

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 3/31/2013 9:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you and Happy Easter poet!
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 10:26:00 AM

    Wooooooooow... ok, this is BY FAR the best piece I have read all month, I kid you not! Not only am I also adding you to my list of favorite poets, but I am adding this to my list of favorites as well! This really is so powerful and it touched my heart and soul. These kind of people will be going to hell in a hand basket! WELL done! :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 3/30/2013 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow...I'm moved beyond words! It most definitely will not be a round trip for this wolf! Thanks!
  1. Date: 3/29/2013 6:15:00 PM

    This is a pounding poem from you, Dr. Linton Bradley! In fact, a strong bassline would go along with it very well. I respect Tim's comment -- if anything, I feel similar. Another pro about believing in the source instead of watered-down interpretations, is this will also keep me away from joining freaky cults. Koresh was a creep! But the FBI handled the situation in a terrible manner, making two wrongs. Hindsight is too easy to lean on though. Patience is a virtue -- the FBI should have used it.

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    The Federal Hit Squad showed up there instead of the officers. Innocence was lost in the battle!
  1. Date: 3/29/2013 12:21:00 PM

    A "voice of truth" that you have written in a clever way Marlon. - Well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Happy Easter!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 3/29/2013 12:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne for the visit, and Happy Easter to you and yours!
  1. Date: 3/29/2013 7:00:00 AM

    You nailed it here Scribe!...If there is a hell, these so called 'ministers' who claim to know God personally should be first in line...One reason why I do not attend church any more...I believe in God but NOT religion which makes me an agnostic, I suppose...Thanks for this - Tim

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    I do understand...God never said what denomination he belonged! Thanks Tim!
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 9:17:00 PM

    This is good Marlon. I could tell stories, about these Minsters. Not all of them are bad, but not all are bad either. A lot of them - all they care about is money so they try to beain wash the people. As for me - I trust in God alone. Thanks for sharing this. Que pases feliz Easter. Lucilla

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 3/29/2013 6:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Lucilla...I only trust the Lord also!
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 6:56:00 PM

    If I get this correctly a great message and write...anyone who deviates from scripture to abuse..the kindness and wanting faith of man for self gain really sucks!...

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 3/28/2013 7:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Right on the money! Thanks for the kind words!
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