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First smile - poem for my granddaughter

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First smile - poem for my granddaughter

Your first smile wiped away the dust and mold from the canvas of my soul and your first laughter splashed its bright colours over dark and somber tones and then you framed it with a rainbow created by the refracted light of your transparent being.

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  1. Date: 3/29/2013 9:30:00 PM
    How sweet that power of even a small smile. Welcome to P-Soup and keep on writing SuZ

    Sanmi Avatar Leo Sanmi
    Date: 5/20/2013 6:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Now I see what you are saying. A smile is a wonderful was of talking without uttering a word. it is a commune of souls. Nice poem. Keep writing
    De la Croes Avatar David De la Croes
    Date: 4/2/2013 12:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, SuZ!