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Droplets of Heaven

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Droplets of Heaven

OLD POEM: GRAY SKY FALLS (SIJO)

Paralyzed sunshine of the day, gray kissed skyscrapers in faint
Blurry dance stuck in the air as the dew pervades some occlusions
Day sketched gloom in beauty behind the droplets of breezy nimbus

NEW POEM:

Thy painter of sky smiled from altitudes
The angels flew, danced amid the wet clouds
Coloring mist, dust of beatitude
Heaven's gate roared, the lightning showed some proud

The veil of universe lurks from behind
The shades crawl slow, camouflaged by the dark
Droplets pervade the odor of sweet mind
Like the smell of a wet land, the yearn park

Breezes whistle through the aisles of droplets
Caressing the skin while sky sheds its tears
Gaze to the stunning gloom in violets
The sparks steal some moments, shines with no fears

Flood recede and leaves caught the rest of rain
As my heart fades from melancholy, drained

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4th position
Metamorph
Sponsor	Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 5/1/2013 6:01:00 PM
    Yanny, Congratulations :-) In Debbie's "Metamorph" contest. always~ PD

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 5/16/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda :D wishing you a lovely day :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 2:03:00 PM
    Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your great win..Sara

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/29/2013 11:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara glad to have your comment here :D wishing you a wonderful day :) hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 12:29:00 AM
    Such rich imagery! Happy I got a chance to read it. Thank you for the post.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/29/2013 9:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sean pleasure to have a visit by you :D wishing you a wonderful day, hug, Yanny :D
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 11:04:00 AM
    What a well deserved win, Yanny. You never fail to kick booty on your first attempt at poetry forms- this sonnet is sensational! Good job, you rock! :) Hugs!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/28/2013 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne yours are stunning as well, I enjoyed your lyric song too :D wishing you a lovely day there :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:10:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Excellent piece ~A.O

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/28/2013 6:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Abdul :D glad to have your second visit :D wishing you a wonderful day :) hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 5:17:00 PM
    Yanny, sonnet is my favorite form and I loved your sonnet---especially for first time---great poem!!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/25/2013 6:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Craigh, I'm glad that you like it :D yes this is my first sonnets and I really enjoyed it a lot too :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 4:37:00 PM
    Way to go Yanny, excellent win! I enjoyed reading again.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/25/2013 6:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rick, always pleasure to have you here :D wishing you a wonderful day, hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 3:43:00 PM
    I loved both of these, to me they are equally good! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/25/2013 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debbie your contest is really challenging and inspired me a lot :) wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 10:12:00 AM
    Many congratulations Yanny luv , a well deserved win xx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/25/2013 6:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mandy :D wishing you a wonderful day there :) hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/17/2013 8:48:00 AM
    This is really beautiful my friend Yanny... Good luck in the contest.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/25/2013 6:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Abdul :D
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 12:56:00 PM
    - You have written it very beautifully Yanny!!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/30/2013 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne :D your words really uplifting, you are absolutely made my day Anne :D hug,yanny
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 7:54:00 AM
    Stunning! Old and new in perfectness of harmony. Sweet dreams Yanny.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/28/2013 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rick, this is my first attempt in sonnet and it's a pleasure to see such an uplifting comment by you in my evening :D wishing you a lovely day :D hug, yanny