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Below is the poem entitled Cookies which was written by poet David William Breidenthal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Cookies are addictive!
OoOoH! Here's one to snatch!
Okay...where's the chocolate chips?
Kraving too many of these treats
I want some now! But...I might get beeefy...
Every bite is mouthwatering, soft and crisp
Should I take another cookie?

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  1. Date: 7/12/2014 1:59:00 AM
    I have about a thousand views on this poem! Thanks guyz so very much! YAY! COOKIES ARE ADDICTIVE AND COOL! (: ~ Feel free to read more of my verses.

  1. Date: 5/6/2014 7:30:00 PM
    11th on the list: You know, David? Cookie Monster is one of my all-time favorite characters. It's such a creative concept and this piece can pass as an ode for him. Also, I can see you stealing and eating those cookies the way he always does. OMNOMNOMNOMNOM!!!

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 9:02:00 PM
    THANKX POETZ! :DD I have about 600 views on this particular poem! Thankx for all of you guyz support! ~~ DWB

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 2:02:00 PM
    - Take one .... take four .... take everyone David, a nice poem from you (to me), thanks. - Have a wonderful Easter. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 3/31/2013 1:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    haha you're silly! Thanks for your sweet comments. I actually don't celebrate Easter, but I hope you have a good one. ENJOY your spring break and have a joyous week. -DWB