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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 12:11:00 AM
    Trying to find a poem i didn t read but i read this one too.Hope you..your lovely wife and kids are doing well Cal..Maybe its time for some new poems-Charma : )

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 12:46:00 PM
    This is a very intriguing read-- and I really like your title for this! You said I was a natural storyteller-- shucks I am humbled by that since you are one gripping and wonderful storyteller-- you held my attention throughout, although admittedly, I would prefer more line breaks. Way to go with your descriptions here, Caleb. Btw, how nice of you to catch something else in my Silver Strands poem-- one thing about my writes, I like to put layers in them most of the time ;)

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 5:05:00 PM
    Caleb, you currently have two poems in the top 100 list of recent poems posted. I guess they go by number of comments made on the poems. congrats because this is one that really deserves it. Echoes was your other one. It was really high on the list. I rarely check those lists. I have only one on it this time.

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 1:38:00 AM
    I love the metaphors you used in this prose poem Caleb and the love story with a tragic end..Very creative indeed..Charma : )

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 11:56:00 PM
    This is AWESOME, Caleb. I just love the "feel" of it. When you say your legs ARE sand. What a great metaphor. and the way you describe the waves taking each one by one by one. yes, I would call this prose. I did a chapbook called prosies. I realized my free verse were actually prose, and I changed them all to this paragraph style. It's a great style for you.

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 11:56:00 PM
    and I take this as a dream. The other day, after having seen the walking Dead, I dreamed of a little kitty and having to stomp its poor head when it came at me as a zombie cat!!

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 12:24:00 PM
    Caleb, a fantastic write - you impress me much!! B-R-A-V-O!! - (the "form" does not mean so much to me, love it!) - Wish you a nice Easter. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 11:03:00 AM
    This is AWESOME!!! Seriously, this is so creative and imaginative. You should write prose more often - and yes, in my opinion, this piece is prose. Check this out for more info: (P.S. If I'm a haiku ninja, I guess that makes you a creative pill popper? haha)