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  1. Date: 3/27/2013 11:08:00 AM
    wow Gail this is a wonderful and intelligent poem,, and sadly you are so right, in fact we have had some of them here on soup, a winner this is...

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Reads like winning material to me..This one is definitely truth based..Sad that there are people like that but there are those evil humans out there..Thanks for your visit to my work..Your kind review is very uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 1:19:00 PM
    This is very sinister and true, good write my friend, sorry I haven't been around much lately, I miss not reading your works, all is well I hope, sending a hug xxx

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 12:05:00 PM
    - You've hit the nail on the head with this poem Gail, very well written! - Good luck in the contest! - Wish you a nice Easter. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 11:05:00 AM
    Hey Gail, this is a really powerful poem... what I love is that you emphasized that these kind of sinister people blame it all on other people, or typically their mental state. There is no- and I mean NO- justification for acts of violence. Violence is a personal choice, and I am glad you have posted these words that stress that. Thank you for this and best of luck to you in the contest!

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 10:41:00 AM
    Lovin the darkness from you! Also I enjoyed your contest and thank you for the place!

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 9:41:00 AM
    Not your usual gentle and happy poetry but very appropriate for the contest and well written. Thank you Gail for my placement in your contest. It was a joy to write on that theme. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 8:59:00 AM
    Aye to this awesome write. i enjoyed the prowess that lurked within it... Excellent ~ A.O

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 8:41:00 AM
    This is certainly the frightening write my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this morning! What a powerful piece, quite the dreary person this poem is about! Fantastic write this is Gail! Great Work!!