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pleasure is passion

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pleasure is passion

I cant fight this
Sets me reeling everytime
Curls my toes
Flotas my boat
Sends chills down my spine

I want to hold onto this 
Im gonna never let it go
To stay like this forever?
You wouldnt dare say no
 
No need to be ashamed 
I enjoy it just like you,
Just wallow in the way this feels
Theres still so much more to do

Its a little much but dont be shy
I aim to please
To make sure you cry

And cringe
And squirm
Yet beg for more
Dont worry 
Dnt wonder
Cuz I'm gonna make you sure

But after this 
You'll never leave
Cuz you cant touch
What you cant see

I see you but I dont feel
I told you this aint real it's just a game
It's purely pleasure I dnt see love 
I'll never touch it aint that a shame

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  1. Date: 11/5/2013 11:03:00 AM
    You indeed do aim to please. Good job

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 5:51:00 PM
    Lmao i like this one.

    smith Avatar joanna smith
    Date: 11/4/2013 6:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thankyou. And I am glad you decided to read it.
  1. Date: 11/4/2013 1:45:00 PM
    and passion a pipe dream???... Nice poem... Terry

    smith Avatar joanna smith
    Date: 11/4/2013 6:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thats right. Pleasure is as close as you'll get if you ask me! Thanks for stopping to give this a read.
  1. Date: 4/7/2013 12:41:00 PM
    I love your poem!!!!! (PS, I found a typo in the first verse- should it say floats)? Have an amazing day! Hugs :)

    smith Avatar joanna smith
    Date: 4/20/2013 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the compliment and catching that typo! Cant stand typos
  1. Date: 4/4/2013 6:30:00 PM
    Yea! :)

    smith Avatar joanna smith
    Date: 11/4/2013 6:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thankyou :)
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 10:24:00 AM
    The illusive love. If you think you are in love, you aint. Good stuff, joanna. daver

    smith Avatar joanna smith
    Date: 11/4/2013 6:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the compliment and for understanding the poetry here. I thought it might be confusing when I originally posted it but you got it!
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 6:39:00 PM
    Hi Joanna, I only found you because you left a comment on mine, thank you for that. I see your a writer of dark poetry, I like that very much and have been through all your writes. You are very good and I hope you'll post more. Take care, Regards Richard

    smith Avatar joanna smith
    Date: 11/4/2013 6:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thankyou very much. I have always considered myself mediocre because of my limited education of poetry and form but I write what comes to my mind and my heart and am flattered to think that anyone would read all of my poetry. That is very encouraging for me just soyou know.
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 12:10:00 AM
    that is what passion feels like. You said it!!!

    smith Avatar joanna smith
    Date: 11/4/2013 6:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading
  1. Date: 3/26/2013 6:17:00 AM
    I only dropped by to thank you for the comments you've left me. And I found this. Passionate piece of writing, Joanna. But is the ending less than happy?

    smith Avatar joanna smith
    Date: 11/4/2013 6:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No not less than happy just a little sarcastic, which speaks of my personality. Thankyou for taking the time out to read my writing and sorry I never responded until now.
  1. Date: 3/26/2013 3:27:00 AM
    Wow a cool songlike poem i enjoyd. Im an indian.

    smith Avatar joanna smith
    Date: 11/4/2013 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Why thankyou. I wouldnt say I have ever written a poemquite like this but friends have been encouraging me to write songs so it's good that you would describe this as song like. Thankyou for reading.