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Dream

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Dream

Perfect lips pouting
Red pink as if lightly touched by strawberries 
Eyes compelling drawing in the masses
Brown the color of honey, warm and inviting
Hair flowing wind blown
Brown black, lightly highlighted perfectly shiny smelling like heaven
You are the perfect dream woman
Two races, three races, maybe more
Mix Chick.

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  1. Date: 5/7/2013 12:45:00 PM
    Perfectly expressed and beautiful... I like each line. Great Job~A.O

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 5:18:00 PM
    I like the figurative language used in this piece.Very beautiful

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 12:16:00 AM
    Beautifully and sensually descriptive. Love it. - Red

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 7:21:00 AM
    Excellent write. Love your writings. Tfs

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 10:32:00 PM
    I find this poem very alluring. I like how you pulled it all together with the last two words.

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 10:19:00 AM
    wonderful write,Mix Chick lol

    A A Avatar Ale A A
    Date: 3/26/2013 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Richard, Good to see you.
  1. Date: 3/26/2013 5:45:00 AM
    Love the imagery here...a huge fan!!!

    A A Avatar Ale A A
    Date: 3/26/2013 7:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Pace
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 8:39:00 PM
    This poem tastes sweet. It's delicious to read. ~Jeremy

    A A Avatar Ale A A
    Date: 3/26/2013 7:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well that's sounds good so thank you.
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 9:50:00 AM
    Wonderful descriptive imagery. I often wonder about my heritage. Whatever it is, it can't come close to your Mix Chick. Jack

    A A Avatar Ale A A
    Date: 3/25/2013 1:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    For me nothing compares :).
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 8:53:00 AM
    DELICIOUS!!! Love those mix chicks... they are a smouldering obsession of mine! LOL Yummy hugs and love... Jackers! xox

    A A Avatar Ale A A
    Date: 3/25/2013 1:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Jack my friend good to hear from you. Thanks for the kind words.