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On a Bench

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On a Bench

Sitting on a bench
she met him one day
in the park, he passed by
and stole her heart away

sitting on a bench,
when he told her he'd be gone for a year
the army needed soldiers
and she was left with her fear

sitting on a bench
in the summer, in the fall
the leaves fell away
and she waited through all

sitting on a bench
while the snow came and went
while the grass turned back green
and less letters were sent

sitting on a bench
one year later, anticipating
sitting on a bench
where she still is found waiting


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  1. Date: 3/29/2013 4:57:00 PM

    so sad this one. But I really like how you approached the theme. Congrats on a well deserved win.

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 10:15:00 PM

    Brandi, I'm stopping by to say hi, and wish you an early Happy Easter, just in case I don't have time to stop by in the next few days. take care and have yourself a good one~ Always & Forever *LINDA"

    Mitchell Avatar Brandi Mitchell Date: 3/29/2013 1:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much! You too! Just remember the reason for the season:)
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 3:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Brandi xx

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 5:22:00 PM

    Congrats Brandi....Donna

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 2:01:00 PM

    Touching. Congrats on your win. Rick

    Mitchell Avatar Brandi Mitchell Date: 3/29/2013 1:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks!!! It means a lot:)
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 1:33:00 PM

    Very sad but a winner. Congratulations. Love, Joyce