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The Oasis- Haiku Trilogy

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Below is the poem entitled The Oasis- Haiku Trilogy which was written by poet Eileen Manassian. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Oasis- Haiku Trilogy

In the vast desert
I search for love’s oasis
My lips cracked and parched

There In the distance
The promised rest of your love
I stumble forward

The shimmering heat
I’m buried in the hot sand
You were a mirage


Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 3/27/2013 6:06:00 PM
    Was I, what a shame lol, Hang on, I can't be a mirage, coz you said you missed me and that made me so happy happy happy, to think I was missed, thank you Eileen, made my day that has. Another lovely write from you. Take care, Regards Richard

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/28/2013 1:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Thanks for the post. I was wondering why I hadn't read any comments from you for a bit. Glad you are alive and kicking! :) Take care.
  1. Date: 3/24/2013 6:21:00 PM
    This is so good, I was drawn into the story.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/25/2013 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Welcome!
  1. Date: 3/24/2013 6:00:00 PM
    your metaphors are so clever and brilliant! this one is a gem...

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/24/2013 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) I've missed you, Ilene. Thanks for the visit!