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A monument

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Below is the poem entitled A monument which was written by poet RUDOLPH RINALDI. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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A monument

Holding the pencil 
In my hand 
I tighten it 
And lift in over my head 
Towards heaven
With love and anger in my heart

I thrust it downward
Lead first 
Into the earth
Until it stands free
One with the earth 
A monument 

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  1. Date: 4/6/2013 8:23:00 AM
    WOW-- Intense, but exceptional write-- a 'pencil' comparitive is unique and clever. I have to ask-- is this frustration at writing, or just a display of emotion? Welcome to P/Soup.