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Haiku 16

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Haiku 16

after hours
of wall-staring -
this drab haiku

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  1. Date: 3/25/2013 7:34:00 AM
    Thanks so much for taking so much time to read so many of my poems. I am going to turn your juggling idea into a poem. If you remember which poems you read I have responded to all of your comments. Your trip will result in some wonderful poems. You will meet many new friends and they are all in for a treat when they meet a thoughtful young man named Timothy.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/25/2013 8:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have sent you Soup Mail :)
  1. Date: 3/24/2013 4:13:00 PM
    by the way, just how old are you anyway. I would have thought all the younger guys were texting experts. I am happy to know you are in MY corner on that one!!!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/24/2013 10:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm 18... and don't get me wrong I like to text and I'm pretty fast at it too (it's for sure better than my handwriting!)... I'm just kind of a Grammar Nazi as well, haha... I like to be clear when I'm typing and check for spelling errors...
  1. Date: 3/24/2013 4:12:00 PM
    well, this is not flattering to yourself about your haiku writing and yet, you ended up with a really cool haiku nonetheless. Awesome!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/24/2013 10:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's quite literally what I was doing as well... I was laying on my bed with my Kindle and spent a good 20 - 40 minutes writing random stuff, while checking on some sites... after awhile I realized I was staring at a wall most of the time and then it clicked!
  1. Date: 3/24/2013 12:54:00 PM
    The obvious becomes profound.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/24/2013 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's funny how my "lack of good things" to write about became in and of itself became something to write about... Lol!
  1. Date: 3/24/2013 11:31:00 AM
    Next time I attempt to write a haiku, I am definitely coming to you for advice, haha. You really have nailed the form time and again, great job!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 10:25:00 AM
    hahaha. I'd like some of what you're on. Thanks for the laugh, Timothy :)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/24/2013 9:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    *looks around suspiciously*... LOL! I kid... nope no drugs for me, never even touched the stuff, surprisingly...
  1. Date: 3/24/2013 10:20:00 AM
    hahaha, made me laugh out loud, sometimes I too sit down to write and there's....nothing

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/24/2013 9:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nice of you stop by Francine :)