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Just A Loving

When the moon is hot
and the sun is a cooling
the stars lose their shine
when the clouds are a fooling.

When one is in love
and the whole world a grooving
every glance you make
when your eyes are a moving.

Every breath we share
when the room is a shaking
every touch of you
just a brand new a waking.

Every mood i swear
of you to keep a thinking
locked away with in
to stop a heart a sinking.

When the moon is hot
and the sun is a cooling
the stars lose their shine
when the clouds are a fooling.

© Harry J Horsman 2013  

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  1. Date: 4/5/2013 8:01:00 PM

    A very good job Harry, beautifully written and the flow and rhyming is perfect. A friend, Lynn

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 7:31:00 PM

    Being in love is grand, you captured the tenderness of it here. Lovely write! Hugs

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 8:16:00 PM

    : ) Love is all, Harry!!

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 2:42:00 PM

    A wonderful rhythm, dear Harry! Now, why don't you try Richard Lamoureux' Questionku? I bet you'll write some gems there! Great work, indeed! Blessings, Hanitra

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 8:09:00 AM

    Sounds like you have quite the girl. I enjoyed your poem this morning.

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 4:43:00 AM

    Hey you, thank you for commenting on my poetry as I have been sick lately so I haven't anwered the call on the comment sheet, Over the last few years I have noticed that you have followed me from time to time,, I truly like your style as my wife does also we follow you as you are one of our fav's on the site. Keep the pen flowing and we will visit soon Sharon and Bob

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 12:24:00 PM

    Nice piece Harry. Keep on writing.

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 9:43:00 AM

    hey hey hey,,, my dear friend poet Harry., how are you,.. just missed to read you poems,,, so nice and amazing write.. how i love your verse....Every breath we share when the room is a shaking every touch of you just a brand new a waking....:) <3 Sk

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 7:45:00 AM

    did I call you Jack. I'm reading through my favorites and Jack sounds just like Harry - right? Sorry.

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 7:44:00 AM

    Jack - The blossoms of love shine through this lovely scenes so wonderfully written. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 4:53:00 AM

    romance is in the air, what a stunner harry xx

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 11:15:00 PM

    Harry!!! a 7 from me! It got my heart a moving! :) Hugs!

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  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:00:00 PM

    wonderful write wishes

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 3:45:00 PM

    You sound like a man in love, Harry. Love your poem. Sweet!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 3:03:00 PM

    and thanks for your comment on my Timex villanelle. ARe you keeping busy with your other projects lately?

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 3:01:00 PM

    this is so cool, and the way you chose the imagery of that repeating stanza: when the stars lose their shine when the clouds are a fooling.... GREAT work, Harry. And so romantic!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 2:29:00 PM

    I happen to love passion. Makes me think how special these feelings are since they don't often happen in a way that's reciprocated. I like the way the heart is held from sinking almost like a celestial object.

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 1:29:00 PM

    Harry; Did you pill this one out of a hat? It's just great. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 11:57:00 AM

    Harry this is just wonderful, I love it...David

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 11:17:00 AM

    Hi Harry! I am so happy you commented on one of my poems, I haven't heard from you or checked out your poetry since I have been swamped with college! This is absolutely stunning, the imagery, everything. What a pleasure to read, I will definitely go thru more of your work, I haven't in about a month! Hugs :)

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 9:28:00 AM

    A passionate write my dear friend Harry. I've enjoyed reading it tonight. I great write indeed of one of my fav. poets! Thank you so much for sharing and have a happy and blessed Easter Season! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 9:08:00 AM

    Oooh, I love your gentle touch. Nice writing, Harry. I like like like - very, very much. :)

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:29:00 AM

    Harry, Interesting and romantic, enjoyed!! Jag

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:15:00 AM

    - Harry, it's gorgeous ..... and romantic!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 7:36:00 AM

    I enjoy the folksy way this is written. Brings a great deal of warmth to the poem. Very nice.

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 6:51:00 AM

    Beautiful poem here harry full of romantic lines!Love this.

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 6:44:00 AM

    Pure feelings, Harry, nice! Jimbo