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Initials on a Tree

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Initials on a Tree

I sign your initials on an old tree And surround it with a heart of desire I want the world out there to come and see The world needs to see our heart completely That’s been put on this tree with love and fire I sign your initials on an old tree People want to view this tree tenderly It’s not like the tree sits on any mire I want the world out there to come and see Heart is formed with love eventually The tree should never be placed on a pyre I sign your initials on an old tree Formed are letters of our names perfectly All the letters put on smoothly not dire I want the world out there to come and see The world can see our kind heart lovingly Our love together shall never expire I sign your initials on an old tree I want the world out there to come and see
Russell Sivey Entered into Anne Currin's "Anne's Favorite Poetry Form: Villanelle! (Any Subject)" contest 3/24/2013

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  1. Date: 4/4/2013 5:45:00 PM
    Congratulations Russel.. nice!

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 11:02:00 AM
    nice job, congrats on your win Russell

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 4:47:00 AM
    I told you my dear friend, you will win and you won! Big congratulations! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 8:05:00 PM
    And beautiful villanelle. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 6:28:00 PM
    Nice sentiments, Russelll and a great villanelle. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 3:19:00 PM
    glad to see this on the winners' list, my friend. Big congrats to you.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 3:19:00 PM
    So thoughtfully penned Russell--well deserved win.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 3:13:00 PM
    Congratulations Russell, you have two wins in this contest. Thanks so much for your feedback on my villanelle, without your guidance my poem would not have been chosen.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 1:57:00 PM
    Gorgeous villanelle about love, Russell. Well done, congrats on your win in my contest. :)

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 2:51:00 PM
    That is a pleasant refrain , your alternating lines you chose for this sweet villanelle, Russell. Very nice.

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 10:11:00 AM
    Always very tender and endearing with your pieces Russel. Very exquisitely written... I always find those little heart-shaped markings a worthwhile find, especially when you're not expecting it.

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:52:00 AM
    I find this form so confusing..but you did a great job with it. Way to go! BG

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 7:12:00 AM
    Well done! Russell! Jimbo

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 6:37:00 AM
    You're a brave man to attempt a "villanelle" but everything came up roses! What a great write, my good man! Bravo! Here's wishing you much luck in Anne's contest!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 6:00:00 AM
    This is so great and amazing my dear friend Russell! This is absolutely a brilliant idea on how to do this very nice form which I think a hard one to do for me. I love it so much! This is a winner for me. I'll keep it in my favourite treasure list if you don't mind. Thank you so much and Have a blessed Easter Seasons and a grace-filled Palm Sunday today! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 4:27:00 AM
    Love this Russell!Wonderful Villanelle by you here.Enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 10:29:00 PM
    Very beautifully done Russell and what lovely thoughts are amongst the lines!! Best wishes in the contest! love,Deb

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 10:22:00 PM
    Oooh, nice villanelle. I've attempted but one because I find it a difficult form. Good luck in the contest, Russell. :)