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Smile, Son, Smile 'NR'

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Avatar Abdulhafeez Oyewole - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Smile, Son, Smile 'NR'

Smile, son, smile
Smile, son, please.
I can not smile daddy,
I can not smile cheese.

Smile, son, smile
Smile for a pound.
I can not smile daddy
I can not make a sound.

Smile, son, smile
Smile, son, dear.
I can not smile daddy,
I cannot smile clear.

Smile, son, smile
Smile, for a pound.
I can not smile daddy, 
I can not make a sound.

For: Debra Squyres' 
Nursery Rhyme 
Contest.

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  1. Date: 4/13/2013 3:24:00 PM

    I like the feel of this one. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 3:26:00 PM

    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 10:51:00 AM

    A very unique write! Congratulations on the win... a fine piece of work!

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 4:42:00 AM

    Many thanks to all of you. I am delightedly grateful.~A.O

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 3:17:00 AM

    Cute and we'll deserving of the win. Congrats. Rick

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 8:13:00 PM

    A O, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 4:37:00 PM

    oh I do remember this one and how enchanting I found it to be. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 12:55:00 PM

    Hi and congratulations on your win xx

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 12:46:00 PM

    Thank you for entering my contest and Congratulations on your win !!! Reminded me of trying to get smiles from my grandchildren...

    Oyewole Avatar Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 3/30/2013 4:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the placement. I am honored...AO
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 7:30:00 PM

    oh this is so cute. And it reminds me of my grandkids when they were so young and my daughter was trying to get them to smile for the camera!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:12:00 PM

    Cute one..Must be a contest..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara