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Margarito my father

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Margarito my father

Lost in these paths and the go in betweens
All is but a blur of our sunken dreams burned bridges for you and me
I fight myself from with in as I sleep tossing and turning all night
I leave the door cracked for you hoping you will come in
I only have but a childhood memory of you
Made mistakes but we all paid for them
Nothing is left but a plain grave and a few kodaks 
I plan to visit one day
I shall forgive you for leaving
I know ill see you again for you to explain

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  1. Date: 3/25/2013 3:11:00 AM

    Mitchell, you write very well - you've posted several good poems. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Read and write your comment at other "poets' poems and you will get back. - (Give to get) - We are many in this "family" always nice with even more members. - Wishing you a lovely Easter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 10:11:00 AM

    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!