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Opinions, anyone

Why would she make me crawl 
back to you
Always hear how life is bytch 
But thats cruel
Because more people will 
bruise
Batter and choke you
Hold you
From your breath
Kick they foot out while you 
taking a step
Play with your intelect
Spread flies around you like 
death
Were a mask of a friend and 
plunge that banger into your 
chest
Grinning wildly
Teeth turned mesh
Life aint easy 
This is true but dickhead 
people are a mess
The mess
Thatll have you fall back in 
that abyss If you let it
Of cousre
Im lost in the sauce 
Praying so hard my soul is 
hoarse
And my chest cavity is porus
Ears filled with herasy from a 
fake chorus
Wakings a burden
Sleeping a chore
Chiefing settles nerves down to 
the core
So my presence isnt what you 
wanted it for
Could it be
This whole thing is a burden on 
you and yours
Nigga Plz....
My presence is evidence of 
blessings that arent evident to 
your optical preference 
Bredren
Im a testiment of 
perserverance embodied in a 
flesh of hardships 
Night terrors in daylight of 
dark shyt thatll make one 
nauseaus 
Forfit your profits
Make you wanna grab a 
almanac 
Gain knowledge
Instead people wanna crush 
your dreams to appease they 
wallets
Let you pick outa garbage
Throw you scraps so humanity 
can relax off they back while 
you snack on the scraps they 
dusted off they laps
Thats cool tho stuff your face 
til you collaps
Im patient
Walking towards the day of 
celebration waiting for the 
moment of declaration of your 
participation that help fuel this 
patron on his road of ambition 
and dedication
Never ceasing to quit 
Even when exasperated 
Soul suffercating
Body exaggerated over the 
plantation of the good life.... 
Peace

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 10:14:00 AM
    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!