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The Tee Shot

Standing on the tee, driver in hand.

Deciding where, my ball needs to land!

      Once the ball's in flight,

      if I've hit it right,

it will end up, quite near, where I planned!


3/22/13

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  1. Date: 4/13/2013 9:53:00 AM

    Ralph, thanks for supporting the contest with this fun and funny limerick!

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 7:13:00 PM

    Congratulations Ralph

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 11:07:00 AM

    Ralph, stopping by to read your winning poem in Craig's golfing limerick. Congratulations with your fun swing ;-) Always & Forever*PD

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 10:15:00 AM

    Good limerick. Got a chuckle out of it!

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 6:03:00 AM

    lets hope... congratulations Ralph xx

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 4:22:00 AM

    Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 4:22:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Ralph~A.O

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 2:43:00 PM

    if only... congrats on your win Ralph with this optimistic entry

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 3:38:00 PM

    This is VERY nice one. A quick suggestion. The last line is ten syllables. You could substitute very for the word Quite! Luv, Andrea

    TAYLOR Avatar RALPH TAYLOR Date: 3/25/2013 4:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Andrea. Appreciate the help. Made your recommended change. hugs, Ralph
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 10:16:00 AM

    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!