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Carrie On

Distance does not impede her grace
innocence shines on her face
carry on we say
carry us away
Write for us of those olden days
carry our mindset's to child's play.

Days come and go, but she carries
her dreams to us and memories
carry on we say
carry us away
Never leave us alone in reverie.


Dedicated to Carrie Richards

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  1. Date: 4/6/2013 11:45:00 PM

    This was fun, thanks for entering my contest.

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 8:01:00 AM

    Very nice! I wish I had Carrie's touch with free verse especially. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 10:24:00 PM

    A great poet indeed! Thank you for recognizing her talents! RAY

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 8:19:00 PM

    Debbie, Carrie is an awesome lady and poet, this is a nice and lovely tribute. Congratulations!!! God bless your blessing poem. Goodnight*LINDA

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 5:21:00 PM

    A no finer poet could be paid tribute to, and your poem for her is awesome, Debs. Congrats for the win.

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 9:30:00 AM

    Congrats oh cool one and a worthy lady to write your tribute too xx

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 7:37:00 AM

    Agreed, Cher!...She takes me to wonderland every time I read her poems, never boring or repetitive...hmmmn...Someone else comes to mind too, if I could just think of her name...

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 10:36:00 PM

    In one word Debbie, Cöngrats~ A.O

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 9:48:00 PM

    Congrats deb....Carrie is a sweetheart...

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 12:15:00 PM

    She'll love that for sure. It's feels good when someone writes about you. And yes, I do think we still have inhibitions in our dreams ... though sometimes oddly skewed ... ha

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 4:52:00 AM

    Beautiful tribute to Carrie in this verse Debi.Lovely read.

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 7:04:00 PM

    This is beautiful. I am sure that she will love it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:46:00 PM

    A beautifully written poem,

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 12:38:00 PM

    Aw, this is a beautiful dedication to Carrie. She is a sweet lady.

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 11:24:00 AM

    .................. ‡ Ps., Stopping Back By, To Behold Your Beauty Again, Sweet Beautiful Beyound Beautiful Debbie! ˜ A Bonus In Finding Sweet Beautiful Carrie Richards Here Also ˜ 'Beauty Begetting Beauty.' ˜ My Love, Forever & Always, Rachel * Pss., Have A Most Magical Day, Beautiful Girl! *

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 12:36:00 AM

    wow, I love how you used her name in the title. that was so cool. She is my hero here too!!

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 8:59:00 PM

    oh.....ps.......sorry I forgot....a big thank you for my placement in your recent contest! Amazingly complex pictures you gave us for inspiration..so fun to read what everyone did ...going in so many different directions!

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 8:50:00 PM

    Gulp ! gulp! Thanks to Ruben's comment, (he just told me to check your latest poem))...I am so touched, and flattered! Especially coming from you, the one who has patiently guided, and mentored me,without even pulling out all your hair...(hopefully!!), helped me improve from a fledging no-nothing wanna-be poet...to actually filling my binder with a few adequate poems. Thank you so much Deb....means a lot coming from one who I admire mucho!! (blushing here!) :) xoxoxo

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 7:43:00 PM

    A beautiful dedication to Carrie, a fine person and extraordinary poet! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 7:36:00 PM

    A FAV!!! I love it! The repeated lines are musical! Great verse dedicated to our great Carrie! If it's for the contest: win-win!! I've been waiting for you in my last blog; where were you? : ) Have a lovely weekend! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 3:11:00 PM

    ‡ She Seems As Sounds Like My Kind Of Girl, Sweet Beautiful Fascinating Debbie Guzzi! ˜ I Too Love Wonderful Carrie Richards Beautiful Poetry; Reminds Myself Of Your Own Gifted Beauty's Amazing Treasures ˜ Crystals Glass In Hand Lifted High A Toast, Unto The Both Of Splendours; 'Cheers.' ˜ Thank You For The Joy In Your Poetic Queen's Lovely Visit; 'Yesss!' ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *