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Haiku 14

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Haiku 14

new moon
swimming on the surface
of her eyes

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 8:37:00 AM
    This is very pretty. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/23/2013 9:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You as well, my friend!
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 12:14:00 AM
    I get the feeling she has love on her mind or something new in her life that is making her glow. Did I come close? Also, to tell you, I can't believe I did not mention vampires in my suck poem. How did I let THAT slide?? (all that work I did on that poem and I got nuttin' in the contest. hahaha)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/23/2013 12:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That is funny about the vampires... that's the first thing that came to mind when I read your title! So far I've only submitted once into the contest (my fingers are crossed, haha)...
    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/23/2013 12:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    To be honest this just came to me one day (I know that doesn't sound very profound, but that's way poetry is sometimes... something just POPPED in your head... lol). Your interpretation is lovely... when I wrote this I was like "what's more romantic that the discussion of the moon and a girls eyes?"