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PERFECT VERSE

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PERFECT VERSE

Perfection
              is an
                      illusive
                       goal
who
is        to judge
                          when
                       we score
no
doubt
             one
                       poem
will
         tower
                    above
its
peers
             to
                    ourself
if
not
           to
                  our critics
Perfection
                 may 
                   well be
objective
        but
                ever it
remains
objective
                in
                 any case
it
is
      only
                perfect
                  in the
way 
an ice cream
                is
                before
it is
licked
             the
                  delight
an
     etheral
                 passing
                 moment
only 
with
        posterity's
                    eyes
can
perfection
be
              identified 
                  
Hear me read my free 
verse 
 A LABOUR OF LOVE @ 
http://youtu.be/GiD8JdYi-jw

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  1. Date: 3/21/2013 10:03:00 PM
    I love the goal...I'm impressed with your poem Mr. Brian.... goodnight...Linda

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 6:07:00 PM
    You know how to give meat to your poetry Brian, your fan xxx