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  1. Date: 3/10/2014 8:17:00 AM
    The conclusion to this is absolutely fantastic."I chose to ignore these promiscuous appetizers who are overzealous;" What a way to end this poem!! I see where Asante gets her ideas about "virginity", I was thinking the same thing!! Excellent write my friend.Asavvy1

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 3/10/2014 2:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jared.
  1. Date: 2/7/2014 9:16:00 PM
    Is this about virginity or am I way off?

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 2/7/2014 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's actually about the single life, being single and its not on purpose. Your interpretation is interesting though. Thanks for the comments.
  1. Date: 12/8/2013 5:14:00 PM
    Interesting title for such a meaty poem. Love the last line. Bravo!

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 12/8/2013 6:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. Appreciate it. Yes, Skin and Bones refers to the idea of "Being alive, but not necessarily living" basically going through the motions in life, with a slight feeling of being alone.
  1. Date: 11/25/2013 2:33:00 PM
    Very tasty offering, Jiril, enjoyed reading your poem

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 11/25/2013 3:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sheri. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 11:05:00 AM
    Jiril This is an emotional and loving poem. The reader is taken on a roller coaster of devotion and true love nice job

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 10/12/2013 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You, Robin, Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 9/18/2013 8:54:00 PM
    You were quite correct. I found something I like. This is beautiful.

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 9/18/2013 10:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jessica. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 8:55:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS JIRIL, on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. Love ~SKAT~

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 9/7/2013 9:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks SKAT. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 5:12:00 PM
    Jiril, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Nice seeing your poem on the front page... always~ Linda....

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 9/7/2013 5:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Poet Destroyer A. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 2:55:00 AM
    Loving the humanity kitchen painted in here,,lovely Jiril

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 9/2/2013 6:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Raymond. Check out some of the other poems.
  1. Date: 7/7/2013 9:15:00 PM
    Wow jiril,, the title...skin and bones grabbed me so I had to read!! I like how you relate the 2. Very well written. Thankyou 4 sharing and also commenting on my poem a piece of foil. Check out Richard Lamoureux poem..."Dancing on a point" awesome read....:) thanks4sharing..onelove Cheriex

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 7/7/2013 9:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. Appreciate the love. I'll check it out, thanks for telling me.
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 4:27:00 PM
    Very well written alot of feeling put into this write.

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 5/21/2013 4:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Cheryl. Appreciate you reading it.
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 5:53:00 PM
    JIRIL , a nice warm welcome to the soup. My name is Linda, many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to one of my latest contest... called ---> "Only for the New Poets of 2013--the first poem you posted on the soup..." he he he Yes it has a long title. But, I want to give the new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like please consider my contest. I love the enjoyment of meeting and reading the new poems from all new poets. Thank you for your time~ Always*LINDA