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Echoes of the Heart

My flashback continues with echoes of pain 
Thoughtless through life, again and again 
A flimsical girl with such beauty to last 
Yet whispers continue with haunts of the past 

The breaking of hearts, quite easy to do 
Spitting out nothings of, .....I love you 
One by One they fall to their knees 
Placing their ring on the hopes of a tease

Is legacy of memories so good or so bad?
That we go back to times, we've already had? 
Who said that the right way applies to us all?
If this be the case... In Love ... We Must Fall...

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 2:16:00 PM

    Bravo my poet friend... such a great piece of poetry....xx Michael

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 1:47:00 PM

    Wow, this has to be one of the greatest poems you've ever put on the Soup, if not your best one! I really enjoyed reading this wondrously fantastic poem this afternoon! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 10:41:00 AM

    Very well done. Excellent read