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Haiku 13

shorter workday -
I catch a brief shower
of silver rain

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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 7:16:00 AM

    Nice! See my response to your comment for tentative Dancer

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 3/22/2013 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Checking it out now...
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 7:44:00 PM

    another lovely haiku from you

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 3/21/2013 10:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I would love to see you try your hand at one, one of these days... I'm glad you appreciate them :)
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 7:28:00 PM

    this is so pretty with the silver rain line.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 3/21/2013 10:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    On the first day of spring the rain looked AMAZING! It was very odd because the conditions were just to write to make rain so bright it almost blinds your eyes to start at it too long... one of those moments where you almost can't believe what you're seeing.