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The Windmiller's Guest

The day was warm and sweet with spring
no breeze came to tease me.
I'd wondered what my love would bring
I'd wondered. "Where could he be?"

His mill stood high upon the hill
a short ride from my home,
a picnic planned would be a thrill
but that man would not roam.

I grabbed my bonnet, left the shawl
and out the door I ran,
perhaps, he had forgotten all
no sense of time that man.

I found him on the windmill's walk
staring at the gilded sea,
clay pipe in hand he watched a flock
dazed in silent reverie.

He smiled at me and cocked his head
and said love, "Don't you agree?"
what better place to share our bread,
"Have you brought lunch for me?"

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  1. Date: 3/28/2013 9:34:00 PM

    enjoyed your poem..Linda

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 2:54:00 PM

    I really really liked yours a lot, Deb. It was one of the most entertaining ones. Congrats in the contest.

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 1:44:00 PM

    I enjoyed this !! Lunch on the walk of the lighthouse does indeed sound nice. Congratulations on your win!!

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 7:22:00 AM

    sweet picture, Debbie, in perfect cadence. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 9:03:00 PM

    Congratulations, Debbie on your win, a nice touch to the scene.

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 2:05:00 PM

    How 'bout homemade sun-dried tomato hummus with fresh wild thimbleberries for desert?

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 7:10:00 AM

    Awwwww! Miss Pitty Patt you are so practically romantic. 'The way to a man's heart is through his stomach!' Lol. Lovely story. Love you bunches. Scarlet

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 2:15:00 PM

    ............... ‡ Passing Back By Because I Beheld Your Beauty's Priceless Light At Lovely Vienna's Poem A Bit Ago, Sweet Beautiful Astonishing Debbie Guzzi! ˜ Wished To Say Hello As Glimpse Your Mesmerizing Painting Again ˜ Have A Most Glorious Beautiful Evening ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 7:48:00 AM

    I "breathe in" every word ....... GORGEOUS! - Thanks Debbie, have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 11:18:00 AM

    This is so cool just like you xx

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 9:20:00 AM

    A beautiful poem. Namaste. Rick

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 4:31:00 PM

    Debbie; i love this. it's so unique. but you forgot his lunch. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 3:35:00 PM

    I LOVE how you did yours. Quite different from my take on that same picture too. Love how yours had a humorous slant! that's funny DAvid asking what contest this is for!!! he is not paying attention. ahahha

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 3:27:00 PM

    Debbie this is the second one I have read with this title is there a contest? if so you have a strong entree for it....David

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 3:00:00 PM

    ..."*.)? I Love Your Wonderful Poetry When You Write So Beautifully, Sweet Beautiful Amazing Debbie Guzzi! ~ I Knew That This Picturesque In Splendours Pleasing Canvas Was Going To Become A Cherishable Favourite Afore Finishing The Third Stanza ~ You Are Mesmerizing, In Such A Beautiful Way ~ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *