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The Young Paladin

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The Young Paladin

A small man with strong muscles stands on top of a training mound. He was raised a farmer's son and toiled most days from sun up to sun down in the fields of Azeroth. He was called upon to bring glory back to the land by defending the weak and saving the righteous. His family was slaughtered in the battle for West Fall and he was left for dead. His will to survive and his will to up hold honor and defend the helpless has brought him here to learn. This young man will have many perils and risk life everyday to defend his people. This is the story of the young paladin named Pid and his adventures in the land of Eastern Kingdoms and beyond.....

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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 1:18:00 AM
    Donald,... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. goodnight. <3 =LINDA=

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 8:49:00 PM
    Dear Donald Congratulations on YOUR Winning POEM "The Young Paladin" Great start, please keep me Posted on future Postings YOUR Quill is Inspiring. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 4:17:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Donald xx

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 5:44:00 PM
    Donald, The New Poets of 2013, Congratulations in this contest. Hope to read more of your poems. Take Care*SKAT

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 7:43:00 PM
    Donald!! Welcome to the Soup!! And Big Congrats on your win with this creative story...I want to read more!!! :) well done, Deb

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 6:52:00 AM
    Donald you have a nice style and I likedthis write looking forward to more. Rick

    Williams Avatar Donald Williams
    Date: 3/25/2013 8:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Rick, This was suppose to be a preamble to a book I am writing. Once I get started the words just flow like warmed chocolate in a fondu :D stay tuned for more...
    Zablocki Avatar Rick Zablocki
    Date: 3/25/2013 6:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    *looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:31:00 PM
    Donald, CONGRATULATIONS with the first poem you posted on the soup :-) it was an honor in hosting this contest for the New Poets of 2013. Thank you for the support. Please enjoy your winning poem. By the way, I posted a blog in honor of the poets who made the list of this contest. The blogs name ----> ""I got the answer :-) What is a poet?"" please check out the blog when you have time. It's a nice gesture from me to you ~ xox ~ LINDA

    Williams Avatar Donald Williams
    Date: 3/25/2013 5:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It is an honor PD, I am so blessed to be selected. Thank you for your kind words and congratulations. It was a pleasure to bring enjoyment with my writing and am looking forward to writing more for everyone.
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 5:58:00 PM
    DONALD , a nice warm welcome to the soup. My name is Linda, many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to one of my latest contest... called ---> "Only for the New Poets of 2013--the first poem you posted on the soup..." he he he Yes it has a long title. But, I want to give the new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like please consider my contest. I love the enjoyment of meeting and reading the new poems from all new poets. Thank you for your time~ Always*LINDA