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Tropical Romance

A feast of passion
in tastes of endless desire
our bodies tremble
within the ripple of the surf,
surging wave after wave flows.

© Harry J Horsman 2013 

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  1. Date: 3/27/2013 9:29:00 PM

    Oh I like this harry ;} very nice . have a blessed Easter ;}

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 11:35:00 PM

    Very Hot! My guess is the waves didn't consist of water.

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 8:32:00 PM

    It would be nice to do just this all day...a fulfilling feast!

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 8:21:00 PM

    nice Tanka Harry...enjoyed

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 4:36:00 PM

    Great poem Harry. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 3:41:00 PM

    ooh lalala. A sensual tanka!!

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 1:42:00 PM

    nice one, harry!

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 12:54:00 PM

    - Thanks for sharing your love in a romantic poem Harry. - It is written beautifully! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 11:46:00 AM

    This is dripping with passion! I LOVE IT! A 7 from me! Good one, Harry! The surge upon surge of waves was a brilliant metaphor. You are a clever man!

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 11:04:00 AM

    A beautiful image indeed,, love it harry xx

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 10:30:00 AM

    Harry this is so stunning. I love the way your words always ignite a beautiful picture. Hugs and luv, Gail