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Why I Hate You

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Why I Hate You

You utter words that are so mean
that I felt like shedding tears
You have gestures that makes me feel bad
that makes me feel anxious
...and I hate you for that.

You call my name in sweetest way
that I could hardly speak
You smile with all your heart
that always left me stunned.
...and I love you for that.

You all had it all
showing me the worst I have and 
letting me realize the best i always had
that makes me feel great and proud.
...and I adore you for that.

But I know you don't feel that much for me
You'll never have a chance to think about me
You'll never have time to spend with me
'cause you have her enough for you.
...and I admire you for that.

..but for letting me feel special
...I really do hate you..


2013-02-10

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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 9:05:00 AM
    Oh yes, I enjoy very much, just made a few suggestions to make it more in line with English translation, but I love the intent and feeling. I hope this is ok. I would have sent this as a message, but don't see how.

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 2:54:00 PM
    The imagery and feeling are very strong here, intense. Nice. Some suggestions?: first line: "Is" should be "are"

    bellen Avatar charmane bellen
    Date: 11/10/2013 1:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks a lot my dear..hope you enjoyed reading despite of so many flaws in my grammar :)