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Pandora's Kiss

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Pandora's Kiss

"Pandora's Pearls"

Crystal tears drown under the best velvet distinctive feel
A Ghostly feel that leads into a clear diamond road
I found myself seduced down an Ancient Silk Caravan path, 
There she hid behind the golden stones she built around her heart.
She was a white gem against the deepest night
She spoke Latin words upon this dreamy sky
Her eyes were deep and the size of my mother’s midnight pearls
I fell into the stare of her bedroom eyes
Wishing to taste the sweetness of her coconut milk fragrance. 
She lowers the cloak to reveal the beauty in her black pearly eyes
Raven hair under her soft sensual disguise
Her lips redder than the violet rays of the sunset

She buried her beauty, and then exposed what’s under the cloak
Soon, her body turned into rot and bones
Her fingers pointed towards another path,
A rugged road of stones and pearls
I took a blade and press it against my skin, 
Concealing my life shut, after she revealed all my forbidden sins
Her lip, her eyes, her pearly grin, my last vision as my blood drew thin
A sweet kiss of death, falling into the eyes of Pandora’s Spell

by;PD

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  1. Date: 9/5/2014 5:13:00 PM
    oh sorry wrong room. i think the bellboy must of given me the wrong key. BwaHaHa the monkey sent me.

  1. Date: 8/13/2014 10:52:00 AM
    Hello Linda, A very well-done epic style poem. Usually anything that carries "Pandora" in the title is an immediate attention getter for me. It certainly captured mine. Your work exhibits exquisite and compelling imagery, and I find the diction employed to be quite enchanting. I look forward to reading much more of your poetry. I can tell from the number of poems you've listed that you've been at this for a while. Again, most excellent work!! Best Wishes, Gary

  1. Date: 1/25/2014 6:11:00 PM
    Hi Linda, as always one is not disappointed when reading this piece. Your writes always hold the interest Linda and they are so diverse. As you slowly build up your dream vision, painting it onto the canvas in your own inimitable style. Again you show there is no ending to your talent. You seem to be able to put your mind to anything. This is so well written Linda. You really did outdo yourself with this one. Have a good day. Catch you later. Yours always....MIKE. Walk in the light.

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 4:22:00 PM
    The moment I saw the title I knew in some way this would be interesting. Pandora...what a symbol. Your imagery is so...colorful. Vast. I really do enjoy your expression. :)

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 10:12:00 AM
    I can well imagine her saying- Allegro Legato Crescendo Vibrato. Lovely poem.

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 5:41:00 AM
    EXTREMELY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING LINDA SHOWS THE SOFT BEAUTY WITHIN

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 2:29:00 PM
    This is the first poem I read of yours and I was very impressed.

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 6:31:00 PM
    You are an awesome writer, and I am enjoying your poetry for the first time, glad I didn't miss this one, beautiful xxx

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 3:53:00 PM
    Wow! Pandora indeed, she sounds like loads of fun...LOL Exquisite poem!

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 12:35:00 PM
    This is a great poem I loved reading it. Well maybe you could email me and talk a get maybe become freinds?

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 6:45:00 PM
    very interesting write Linda I really enjoyed this poem xoxo love Lorenzo

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 3:59:00 AM
    I enjoyed the sense of mystique in this poem Linda. Nice one, well written!

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 9:36:00 AM
    Well..Ole Pandora eh P D she's wild and wiley by the looks of things..' You just got to keep the good part of you safely away from her; and catch the better part of you after she's gone..' L O L.. Oh and thank you for the top spot win dear girl.. Joe..)

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 6:19:00 PM
    Hi linda, I really like your elegant and ausomely descriptive way of choosing your verses in pandora's kiss, I really enjoy the mystique of greek mythology, have a nice day.....kris

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:00:00 PM
    HI, Pd, I changed my entry for you. Too many people were saying nice things about cherry blossoms. But I have lots of DOGS amongst my more recent haiku and I hope you hate the one I submitted. haha

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 7:24:00 AM
    I was completely captivated. I was there with you. Thank you for this beautiful piece of art.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 11:47:00 AM
    Very deep and extraordinary. It's like a glowing ember. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:35:00 AM
    So deep with feeling....

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:17:00 PM
    this is a well deserved top 100.hope you are having good days.take care.

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 10:57:00 AM
    One rich subject and your creative imagination combined. Strong free verse, that deserves a second part. Bravo. G.

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