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Pandora's Kiss

"Pandora's Pearls"

Crystal tears drown under the best velvet distinctive feel.
A Ghostly feel that lead into a clear diamond road.
I found myself seduced down an Ancient Silk Caravan path, 
There she hid behind the golden stones she built around her heart.
She was a white gem against the deepest night.
She spoke Latin words upon this dreamy sky.
Her eyes were deep and the size of my mother’s midnight pearls.
I fell in to the stare of her bedroom eyes.
Wishing to taste the sweetness of her coconut milk fragrance. 
She lowers the cloak to reveal the beauty in her black pearly eyes. 
Raven hair under her soft sensual disguise.
Her lips redder than the violet rays of the sunset.	

She buried her beauty, and then exposed what’s under the cloak.
Soon, her body turned into rot and bones.
Her fingers pointed towards another path,
A rugged road of stones and pearls.
I took a blade and press it against my skin, 
Concealing my life shut, after she revealed all my forbidden sins.
Her lip, her eyes, her pearly grin, my last vision as my blood drew thin.
A sweet kiss of death before I fell into the eyes of Pandora’s Spell.

by;PD

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:00:00 PM

    HI, Pd, I changed my entry for you. Too many people were saying nice things about cherry blossoms. But I have lots of DOGS amongst my more recent haiku and I hope you hate the one I submitted. haha

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 7:24:00 AM

    I was completely captivated. I was there with you. Thank you for this beautiful piece of art.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 11:47:00 AM

    Very deep and extraordinary. It's like a glowing ember. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:35:00 AM

    So deep with feeling....

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:17:00 PM

    this is a well deserved top 100.hope you are having good days.take care.

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 10:57:00 AM

    One rich subject and your creative imagination combined. Strong free verse, that deserves a second part. Bravo. G.

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 3:45:00 PM

    I have heard nothing so enthralling at the beginning and then dip towards a saddened end like this one. i love the description and I could visually those most stand out parts. Great work, very well done, one of the best!!

  1. Date: 4/5/2013 8:47:00 PM

    I found myself amidst a scene of wonderment on the Silk Trail. Cloaked I am against the Mongolian wrath's nature they call Summer. Dust devils lacerate, as they have done whilst I have roamed. He to me with our Black Pearly Eyes, never despise, though we cry. We are one, we are Taras Bulba's children, Ostap & Andriy, for we are we, and she will become thee. Oh my, this could be a story. Apologies for drifting PD. I love this piece, makes me wander. Have a koolio weekend, James xx

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 4:35:00 PM

    Wow. Nice poem. It's deep, unique, twisting, and too many things in one. I find it spookish too. Btw, please notice me if you are gonna make other contests. Thanks.

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 9:24:00 PM

    Hello my ever dearest sis! How are you? I hope you're doing well & at zenith of good health & your love ones as well. I'm quite early at soup today. I'm stopping by to read once again one of your superb & stellar masterpieces. I sooo much adore your poems and I'm embracing them tight every time I read them. Thank you so much again for sharing & for everything! Once again, I'm stopping by to greet you and ur family a HAPPY & BLESSED EASTER SUNDAY! GOD BLESS! Lovely Hugs! love much forever, Leo

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 10:12:00 AM

    wow! i lovee the concept and twist you made. I'm really sorry of your loss, Linda. and you are auch an angel to still continuing the contest and even gave us congrats greetings.. what a great heart you have, dear. I wish only the best for a pure heart like you. xoxo

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 3:41:00 PM

    WHAT IS THIS??? Whoa. Seriously loved it! Always, laura

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 9:27:00 AM

    Wow, so compelling, happy Easter, may the symbol of this season help repair your broken heart. Thinking of you at this Easter too. My mentor.

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 11:39:00 PM

    It has the surreal quality about it which your poems often have, good work:) Jag

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 3:08:00 PM

    This is a captivating write, and Pandora is always an intruiging subject. You have given us her deepest essence. Thanks from the heart. SuZ

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 8:49:00 PM

    WOW! This is awesome and also very heartfelt. A beautiful poem that comes from the heart. Thanks for sharing... Happt Easter....Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 7:33:00 PM

    Soup Mail

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 3:30:00 PM

    Great write-up...I will not want this kiss.

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 1:42:00 PM

    funnny iwas going to write one called spell bound but scaped sinse put some new stuff on here love your metaphores here as always your give a very vivid and exciting desciption of the time and space hope you well back here thursady have nice eveing xxxdavidscott

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 9:11:00 PM

    This is the best one I have seen from you! Very haunting and sensual! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 1:54:00 PM

    I like this PD,, thank you for reading "Fairy Tales " on 18. I've been so sick and still am. I hope you have a nice Easter .

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 11:13:00 AM

    - A lovely poem to read Linda - I wish you a nice Easter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 12:16:00 PM

    very nice.thank you for the comment on my win.The woman inside was the first poem I ever wrote.

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:07:00 AM

    Linda your imagination is at top speed on this unique poem you'e penned. Metaphorically done, and I love how you ended it. Kept me interested all the way through. A tale successfully weaved my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 7:00:00 AM

    Great imagery in this poem Linda!Love this!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:50:00 PM

    Soup Mail, PD ...only one! LOL!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:50:00 PM

    Re-reading this amazing piece, it leaves me breathless every time, PD! Thank you sooo much for another placement in your contest, every time I make it in your winners list I truly am so honored! Hugs <3

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 4:36:00 PM

    You weave your way into the core of this poem in a deep and dazzling way. Great work of art!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 7:29:00 AM

    The imagery is amazing, Linda! What an epic write! :) Hope all is well, my dear! Hugs!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 3:51:00 AM

    Hi Linda, yes i will love to. I know exactly what you mean and yes am just a hobby writer and need all the feedbacks i could get to improve my writings..... Nice poem by da way

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