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Love Garden

Dripping from red rose's lips
To black-eyed susan's amber petals,
The dew paused there -- a thorn to kiss,
And carefully slipped through stings of nettle.

Down to bloom of baby's breath
And on a string of bleeding hearts,
In tandem dripped in dance of death,
Though pink impatiens softly caught.



March 19, 2013
For Sandy's Garden Contest

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  1. Date: 4/5/2013 7:50:00 PM

    Hi Craig, this is a nice winning poem. Congratulations with the awesome view of your own little Garden poem in Sandyivy's contest. God bless~Linda

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 5:17:00 PM

    Told ya.....congrats...Donna

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 3:10:00 PM

    Lovely Craig I enjoyed reading your words.......Seren

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 3:37:00 AM

    Wow! So talented the poet. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 10:48:00 PM

    Beautiful love garden. Congrats for the awesome win.

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 9:44:00 PM

    Thank you' SandyIvy

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 12:22:00 AM

    wow, for the brevity alone, I love this one. You said so much of beauty in these few lines. I wish my entry were this nice!!

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 9:07:00 AM

    I love the way you follow this little droplet of dew along it's journey... touching the beauty with each motion... ending so softly.... brilliantly beautiful.

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 2:53:00 PM

    Craig, this is a very nice and lovely poem.... my favorite line is down to bloom of baby's breath. A beautiful garden mix... good luck in the contest... pd

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 1:26:00 PM

    Such a lovely garden, it makes me want to sit in it and enjoy the flowers, xxx

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 12:08:00 PM

    I think its a winner!!..beautifully done...