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The Black Dog and the Wall

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The Black Dog and the Wall

I always have a Black Dog
Whose friend is the Black Wall
I can keep ahead of the dog
Most days
The wall is easy to step around
Most times

But

The constant nipping of the dog
On my person
On my soul
Finally
Paralyzes 
Me

I see the wall

It covers the sky
It covers the sun
It hides me
From my family
From my friends

Look to the left
The wall is all I see
Look to the right
The wall is all I see

Great Wall of Depression

So it begins again

Time off work
Tweak the meds
Exercise
Mindfulness
Yoga
Counselling

Now something new
To tie up the dog
To break through the wall

Poetry

Writing
Expressing
Feeling

Again

A crack in the wall?
A beam of light?

Black Dog still barking
But just out of
My reach

Hope envelopes 
Me

The nightmare is ending

Again

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 7:00:00 AM
    What an awesome write. I like your style. Well done Rick. I also like your compactness of words with depth. :) big Huggss Deb.

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 3:47:00 AM
    watch the black dogs mate, i did 15 years stupid ...so its all good with me now ....the black dog did his time with me....but i booted his ass somehow :) :( ...

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 9:33:00 PM
    may the veil of black be lifted always...Seren

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 7:07:00 PM
    I shall return the blessing with something I say to people with whom I feel even the smallest of connections...ie depression, black wall, I own a black dog, and I meditate and take meds...we are kindred. Avitya Hridayam Punyam (With a beam of love I touch the heart of my brother)

    Zablocki Avatar Rick Zablocki
    Date: 3/20/2013 7:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks my friend.
  1. Date: 3/20/2013 11:30:00 AM
    Very insightful and interesting write.

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 8:48:00 AM
    This really hits home. It's brave and honest of you to write about your demon. Being bipolar, I too live with depression. My beast is also black, but hairy and formless and almost like smoke. Thanks for your writing. Jack

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 7:12:00 AM
    Deep and symbolic...excellent!

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 12:41:00 AM
    this is pretty cool. I really enjoyed the symbol of the black wall. Also the black dog made me think of an old rock song I used to listen to!!