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For Feelin So Blue -

Friends humor and play me
(They know I'm chra-zee)
Patsy's no fun
Missing you hon

So lone-lee now
Never knew how
without you to cope
Losing false hope
that keeps me stumbling
nowhere I hear rumbling
and mumbling of wraiths
Can't see my blind faith

Need your cozy croon
Your comforting tune
Your old fashion song
Don't seem to belong
anywhere anymore
You ache to my core

Don't know why you ran
and left your old man
alone with his fears
after too many years
Why leave me behind
to fumble and find
that wide joyful grin
that smile in the den
Can't look long your way
I wrench back away
to wander the tombs
of dim vacant rooms
One untouched bed
Are you really dead

Tell me what to do
to replace my lost you
how to turn off our light
and sleep alone tonight...

"Crazy": Written by Willie Nelson and performed by the late Patsy Cline
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  1. Date: 3/19/2013 10:09:00 PM

    hum,, and interesting poem Tim, :-) goodnight...LINDA

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 1:23:00 PM

    *tear* Toby, I've sang Patsey Cline all my life but never related its sorrow of loss to this avenue until now. Thank you. Deloris

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 12:53:00 PM

    Very memorable and inspiring write Tim.....

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 9:47:00 AM

    so sad but so sweet written poem.. i luv this piece my dearest Tim.. <3 ..enjoyed stopping by your wall.. :) thank you for sharing your great tallent <3

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 7:14:00 AM

    I love that music, what a great poem Tim ....Seren

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 2:34:00 AM

    This is so so sad and heart-wrenching, Tim. I can see how the song has brought out this cry of your heart. Death was never meant to be and one day...Death will DIE....Check out the poem by John Donne! Big hug your way.