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Is it really you

When I was young I thought I knew every thing.

But when I got older I realized I didn't know every thing.

SO HERE IS HOW THE STORY GOES!

One night I was at home feeling so along, crying and thinking of the past and all the the things I've done wrong.

And sudanly I feel a hand on my shoulder and a voice in my ear.

And the voice said to me "Don't cry my child I am her with you, you don't have to worry any more because I am always wacthing over you".

I had to turn around to see who this man was, and I couldn't belaeve my eyes.

Is it really you Jesus?

And he said to me " YES MY CHILD IT IS ME"!

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  1. Date: 4/15/2013 11:36:00 PM

    Great poem

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 6:08:00 PM

    CANDICE , a nice warm welcome to the soup. My name is Linda, many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to one of my latest contest... called ---> "Only for the New Poets of 2013--the first poem you posted on the soup..." he he he Yes it has a long title. But, I want to give the new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like please consider my contest. I love the enjoyment of meeting and reading the new poems from all new poets. Thank you for your time~ Always*LINDA

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 5:25:00 AM

    Welcome to the Soup, Candice. Cheers. Rick