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Treasures Forever Hidden

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Treasures Forever Hidden

Stirring sea green waters
Shifting sand finding flesh

Tides come and go
Moonbeams glow

As smooth perfect pearls grow
For thousands of years it has been so

But the lucky ones find their way
To the magical places far away

Those waters forbidden
Where treasures stay forever hidden


©Donna Jones

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  1. Date: 3/27/2013 4:55:00 PM

    Donna i enjoyed your winning poem~SKAT

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/27/2013 9:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much :-) :-)
  1. Date: 3/24/2013 5:30:00 AM

    Beautifully expressed dear Donna! And to think these gems have been stuffed away in a drawer... oh well there out now for all to see and admire and recognize what a great talent you have! Love ya! Tight squeezy hug! xoxoxox

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/24/2013 7:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jack....glad you liked it..although I must confess the ones entered into these contests where the subject is given are new poems...I find it most challenging given the subject to write about..always ..Donna
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 8:02:00 PM

    I remember how much I loved this one the first time. Congrats on your well deserved win.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/24/2013 7:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again Andrea....have a great day..Donna
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 4:18:00 AM

    Many Congrats Donna love, hugs xx

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/23/2013 8:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so so much Mandy ...a note from you feels like a holiday...Donna
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 6:38:00 PM

    Donna congratulations on you win. Wonderfully written. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/22/2013 9:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks bunches Connie :-)
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 6:10:00 PM

    Congrats on the win, !! Jag

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/22/2013 9:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your sweet face is always there Jag...thanks..Donna
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 5:45:00 PM

    Donna, lovely poem. Congratulations on your win.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/22/2013 9:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Very nice of you to stop by Sheri...thanks :-). Donna
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 4:30:00 PM

    Donna, a nice winning poem... many congrats :-).... always & forever* PD

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/22/2013 4:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda. :-) :-) :-)
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 2:39:00 PM

    Donna, you're just getting better and better with each new poem! Congratulations on your win!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/22/2013 3:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Roy.. I Appreciate that....Donna
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 2:08:00 PM

    Amazing write dear Donna, congratulations on your awesome win xxx

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/22/2013 4:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rose....I am humbly honored again...by the way I love the picture you have now..Donna.
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 2:08:00 PM

    I echo what our Liege says below, and perfect in its simplicity like the pearl itself!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/22/2013 4:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Craig and for hosting this contest it was fun...Donna
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 1:48:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/22/2013 4:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks much Debbie..:-) Donna
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 3:34:00 PM

    Dear Donna, Congratulations, may I be the First to say so,as I am sure this will be in the Winners circle.I have swum "Those waters forbidden" and waded "Where treasures stay forever hidden.Thank-YOU for taking me " To the magical places far away" Magnificent Pen.I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry -Soup Mail Reply

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/21/2013 4:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry...forever souls bound...Donna
  1. Date: 3/20/2013 4:21:00 PM

    I love the idea of magical places. Sometimes being hidden is absolutely essential for my survival. Forbidden waters... Hmmm... Jack

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/20/2013 4:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well I hope you liked the poem Jack...I hope you really don't feel you need to hide......that sounds sad....blessings Jack...Donna
  1. Date: 3/19/2013 5:21:00 PM

    Donna, wow.... i will not stray away from my magical place. i like the thought of always knowing where my hidden treasure will always be at... always...pd

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/19/2013 9:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope there is a magical pearl with your name on it waiting for you to find it.....Donna
  1. Date: 3/19/2013 8:12:00 AM

    A gem of a write, Donna, enjoyed, it should do well in the contest!! Jag

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/19/2013 9:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well jag...thanks...these contests are new to me since joining soup. I am just learning how to write given a subject. I find it difficult...but thank you for the kind words..Donna
  1. Date: 3/18/2013 2:42:00 PM

    this is really cool, how they are forever hidden as treasures. a very original unique approach to the contest theme!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/18/2013 6:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea..I like to think some of them do....always appreciate your comments...Donna
  1. Date: 3/18/2013 12:14:00 PM

    Lovely write, good luck to you.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/18/2013 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well thank you lovely Yesha shah ...many blessings...Donna
  1. Date: 3/18/2013 11:28:00 AM

    beautiful poetry, good luck

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/18/2013 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry...haven't seen ya in a while...thought you disappeared on me...good to see you...thanks for the well wishes...Donna
  1. Date: 3/18/2013 7:24:00 AM

    Great entry for the contest. Good luck!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/18/2013 7:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard...appreciate you stopping by...Donna
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/18/2013 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Appreciate it Caleb. :-)
  1. Date: 3/18/2013 6:31:00 AM

    Very dreamy poem, Donna...excellent!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/18/2013 7:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Appreciate it Caleb :-)
  1. Date: 3/18/2013 2:38:00 AM

    A very beautiful poem with fantastic image my dear friend Donna. You've described well one of the most precious gems and one of my favorite things to wear in you poem my dear friend. This is a winner for me. Good luck and best wishes always. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by again on my work leaving me wonderful and inspiring comments. Have a wonderful day in sunshine! love and hugs, Leonora

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/18/2013 7:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Leonora ..I too have pearls but do hope many escape to stay forever hidden! Thank you for the beautiful words...always Donna
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 7:20:00 PM

    nicely penned Donna...

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/17/2013 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-) thank you Joseph!
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 3:15:00 PM

    Somewhere, theres a big magical pearl. Like a genie, waiting to make all our dreams come true. Enjoyed the swim Donna. :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/17/2013 3:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, I like to believe some things escape the raping of our greed and do escape beyond our grasp to remain always. Thanks for reading....Donna
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 2:15:00 PM

    Beautiful poem.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/17/2013 3:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Robert...:-)
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 1:44:00 PM

    Beautifully written Donna! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/17/2013 10:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne lise
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 1:33:00 PM

    Fantastic poem for the contest Donna. Wishing you a happy Sunday. Luv, Gail

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/17/2013 1:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You also Gail and thanks!
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/17/2013 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Eileen. You make me smile...
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 1:28:00 PM

    Well, Donna....I certainly found a treasure! THIS POEM! Loved it! I'm rating it 7!!!!!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/17/2013 1:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Eileen you make me smile
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 12:28:00 PM

    Could I visit those forbidden waters, I sure need some treasure, money's way low...I'm sure that fits the bill for all of us here, no? I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this afternoon my friend! I liked the adventure you sent me on with this incredible piece, such a glorious poem, Great Work!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/17/2013 1:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'll draw you a treasure map Russell....thanks Russell...