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a park bench

a teddy bear 
lies on a bench in the park - -
a little boy cries

For Susan’s Bench contest

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  1. Date: 8/22/2013 6:34:00 PM

    dnt need to be Einstein to know why! good luck and its very good

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 3:09:00 PM

    i like the tender feel of the haiku~ SKAT

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 12:53:00 PM

    So few words convey so much....very moving. Congrats on o super win! Hugs

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 12:32:00 AM

    : ) It had to be on the Winners' List, JM! Congratulations on an awesome win! xx Annalise

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 11:32:00 AM

    So cute on this haiku. Wishing you a very Happy Easter. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 5:29:00 PM

    Great winner...Congrats ..Sara

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 4:50:00 PM

    awwww, this sweet one got a GREAT rating, Jack. BIG congrats to you.

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 10:13:00 PM

    Jack, I'm stopping by to say hi, and wish you an early Happy Easter, just in case I don't have time to stop by in the next few days. take care and have yourself a good one~ Always & Forever *LINDA"

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 6:51:00 AM

    Great Haiku--says so much, congrats!

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 3:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Jack, poor little boy xx

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 7:58:00 PM

    Short and sweet..I love these short forms. Congrats on your win. BG

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 7:49:00 PM

    Excellent haiku Jack, congrats on your big win xxx

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 5:00:00 PM

    Awesome Jack...well deserved win...Donna

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 2:16:00 PM

    Excellent haiku. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 1:19:00 PM

    A well drawn picture with few words. LCongratulations on your big win, Jack. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 12:23:00 PM

    Awesome win, Jack! :)

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 7:37:00 AM

    Jack - How touching. And don't we know a new bear won't do. love Kathy

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 2:43:00 PM

    Ilene is right. this is a very touching one. Way to do the contest for susan!! Wish you had more here for me to see. Thanks for reading all my new posts up this past week. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 3:57:00 PM

    very touching...

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 2:04:00 PM

    awh and I cry for him, find him and take it back Jack ... love it and many thanks xx

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 1:48:00 PM

    Awwww this is such a tender write my friend! You sure know how to pull at ones heartstrings don't you Jack? I really enjoyed reading this illustrious and very well put together Haiku this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, Great work!!

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 1:47:00 PM

    Short but sweet..Reads like winning material to me..I have been running some ideas around..I may have waited too late..Thanks for the visits by my work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 1:14:00 PM

    Awwh! There's that gentle heart of yours coming through, Jack. A winner, already. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 1:13:00 PM

    Poor little teddy bear and poor little boy, how will they now get to sleep at night ... so cute haiku Jack! - Luck in contest.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 11:05:00 AM

    Nice write and thanks for visiting Calgon and mom.

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 10:39:00 AM

    Jack, this haiku is so sweet and touching, I love the visual, and best of luck in the contest, constance