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It's day one of the rest of our lives Beginning as it usually does But this one seems a little bit different The old world is all abuzz It's all abuzz with great excitement Something's about to take place Has this old world finally realized a truth We're destroying the human race Since the very beginning of time it seems Wars have forever been fought Over land, religion and ideologies In a web of destruction we're caught A day of awakening is about to take place We have finally seen the light From this day on wars will be abolished Peace is finally in sight Am I dreaming out loud? Can this be true? Pinch me to make sure I'm awake Let's hope this time it's more than a dream But reality for all our sakes! © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 3/18/2013 9:01:00 AM

    excellent poem Jack, love your work, if only we have more people like you,your words will describe what our hearts are longing.Thank you for sharing,love Ivy

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 3/18/2013 10:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Very nice comments my dear Ivy! You are oh so sweet... thank you! Big big hugs, Jack xoxox
  1. Date: 3/18/2013 1:25:00 AM

    It's nice to see your deeper and more solemn side every once in a while. It's in our nature to cause conflict, to reject the truth, to live our lives in temporal pleasures, never knowing or even understanding, the joy of living for the eternal things! Sad but true... IF ONLY love and kindness dominated hate and conflict... you have a wonderful mind Jack!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 3/18/2013 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Every once in a while I break out of the mould but eventually the sillies overpower me again! Thanks once more for your very kind words, my bright intelligent young friend... you impress me daily!
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 6:56:00 PM

    I think you dream Jack, albeit good for humanity it makes money and people get rich of others misery. We live in a world where there isn't enough poetry like this to remind some they are so human after all. You pack this with a punch! Lizzie

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 3/18/2013 6:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A dreamer? Oh yes, always have been! Thanks my dear Lizzie... poetry allows us to vent! Thanks my sweet friend! Hugs xoxoxox
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 8:06:00 AM

    Sorry... Wrong... And we're destroying our countries from within. Education and research are being decimated by our governments. And not just by government money cuts either. Stupid policies, politics that don't work, and rules that destroy what we have. Jack they need us! They need our fun, laughter, and insight to carry the common person thru... We're treasures... for sure to keep them laughing thru the craziness! Write on MY MAN!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 3/17/2013 8:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We can all dream, right!!! Has any country in the history of man ever got it right??? Hmmm! You and I babe! Great big whopping hugs this bright sunny Sunday morning! Love ya... huggs xox
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 7:38:00 AM

    Peace, bruv. May your and my descendants never have to fight one another. Great write, as ever. :)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 3/17/2013 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Again, Delysia, a great big thank you... you made my day! Just call me a dreamer... big big hugs, Jack xoxox