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  1. Date: 3/19/2013 11:55:00 PM
    this is so sweet. I am seeing several who have done the bench poem as tanka!! Susan should love it. I especially liked the first two lines.

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 4:33:00 PM
    An awesome write, my friend. Good luck in the contest. Rick

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 9:54:00 PM
    Lovely, I've done this very thing many times...

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 2:09:00 PM
    Meditative image Yasmin - where I live the weather remains artic, oh how anxious I am for some clement weather so I can enjoy what you have elegantly described in this art - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 11:35:00 AM
    Wow this is perfect, if I were to judge this contest I would certainly place yours number one my friend! You have done excellent with this incredible poem! Your write is glorious, it flows so very well and says exactly what is needed to be said, pleasantly said too! I really love this wonderful piece, such a brilliant poem, Great Work!

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 7:05:00 AM
    Yasmin, this is a beautiful Tanka, a lovely form, and you honoured it with your words, well done, constance

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 6:36:00 AM
    Well said. All the best for contest. Tfs

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 6:27:00 AM
    - Is there with you my friend Yasmin - Very well written. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 6:05:00 AM
    Glad that it's there..Enjoyed your brief but inspired and captivating contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Sara