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The Angel of Mundane

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Below is the poem entitled The Angel of Mundane which was written by poet Yanny Widjanarko. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Angel of Mundane

The lost little Angel fell into the urban slums . 
Walking aimlessly with nothing but her broken wings 
She turned herself into granules of dusts
Intangible as a vagabond and chose to be unseen

Escaped from the world of infinity, she paved her own paradise
Fell and be united with the mundane, she was breaking the dreams
Once the shield was broke, her purity shone from the filthy damn cloak
The hidden sanctity glowed, illuminated those souls who ingested by the slums

She chose the uneasy part of life
Scars were the last witness which sealed her true story
Somehow she relieved 
Somehow it changed her destiny

Tracing every stitches on her flaw wings
Slums and filth open the other side, her humanity
She was meant to be an angel 
An angel among the damned

Risen from the slums, her wings were torn
The shield of a vagabond cracked
She paid the price with mortality instead of her immortality 
To be a human is her last destiny

Note: this is the modification poem of my "Sestina" hope that you enjoy it :)

*Thanks to : Andrea Dietrich she inspired me to make this poem into a better form :D hug, Yanny

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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 8:06:00 AM
    hi hi hi my sweet girl Yanny..Happy Easter dearest one <3 much luv and lights... just stopping to enjoy your fabulous writes <3 :) Sk

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/31/2013 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Happy Easter too dear Sukmawati :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 5:24:00 AM
    Just say hi and....- Have a beautiful Easter, Yanny! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/31/2013 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Happy Easter too for you dear Anne :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 6:38:00 PM
    I give you a 7 on this one and it will be on my favs. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/31/2013 8:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Luci :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 8:01:00 AM
    WONDERFUL!!! You have the gift of poetry in you... hugs Michael

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/22/2013 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Mike :D your words are really bringing me a new spirit! :D glad to have a visit by you Michael :D hug back :D
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Keep going Yanny. Cheers!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/22/2013 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mike, you make my day! :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/19/2013 10:19:00 PM
    Soupmail

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 8:44:00 AM
    Good night Yanny, I hope you had a wonderful day.

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 9:36:00 PM
    Yanny, this is stunning. Very well done. Donna

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/17/2013 10:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Donna, really a pleasure to have such an uplifting words from you :) wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 5:29:00 PM
    truly a wonderful poem..

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/17/2013 10:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Harry, wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 6:38:00 AM
    - Yanny, this is absolutely gorgeous!! - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/17/2013 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne, glad to have a comment by you :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 12:42:00 AM
    I enjoyed it very much Yanny. Well done and very awe inspiring. Have a wonderful day as I head off to the land of dreams.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/17/2013 10:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad that you like it Rick :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D and thank you for checking up my poem :D hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 12:24:00 AM
    wow, this is so much better as prose, sweetie. I love what you did with it!!! You made it into a very understandable story and to be a human as her destiny is now a clear theme to me. She kind of reminds me of the earthly Mother Teresa!!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 3/17/2013 9:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea, you are really a wonderful teacher :D hug, yanny