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Same Place, Different Locale

I believe I am born again...
There is nothing extraordinary;
just an uncle's old ramshackle house
with the only difference being
it is on an island in the middle of a lake
where I camped and fished as a boy
It is a small lake, full of brim and bass
The island is very tiny...

A usual gathering of friends and family
Normal everyday conversation
A cousin get's up for a drink and a snack
(Yes, yes of course he does!)
People talking and joking in the kitchen
Not important the general subject
or even who they are...it does not apply
I am there strictly to listen and observe
with senses amplified ad-infinity...

Flash. I am outside
I notice colors, shapes and sounds
thousands of times more vivid and sharp
though numbers no longer exist because
there is nothing to count or measure;
no clocks ticking to keep time
because there is no time to keep
No future, no past, only the Now
Only the perfect and eternal Present...

Flash. I am on the opposite bank
Fish hover, dart and fly in crystal waters
yet it is not water and they are not fish
Birds that are not birds swim in rippled air
The earth I stand on is no longer earth 
nor is anything or anyone else
because nothing has a name...

Flash. It seems
good and evil and all in between are no more
because there is no thought or opinion
Every action, movement, voice and word
makes pure and absolute sense
and my immortal mind simply sucks it all in
but is never filled...

Yes, I believe
I believe I am born again...
 







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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 9:47:00 PM

    Tim, Congratulations with your awesome winning free verse poem... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:51:00 PM

    congrats on your win in the contest with this gem take care cory

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:30:00 PM

    Loved the theme of this one and extremely well written. Congrats and tanks for submitting to my contest. Kim

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:29:00 PM

    Look at you GO Cher a great win. Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 10:29:00 AM

    Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 10:10:00 AM

    wow, this would be an awesome thing to have happen to you!! Big congrats on your win. If not for it being in the contest, I'd not have seen this probably.

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 10:00:00 AM

    Congrats on your win~A.O

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 9:22:00 AM

    Oh wow, Tim............how did I miss this one??? Flash............!! Do you know how talented you are??? Flash!!!! WE KNOW !!!!!

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 9:29:00 PM

    Tim, the song was wonderful... I like the singer, but not his name.. LOL... , congratulations... LINDA

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 8:36:00 PM

    nice' Nate

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 6:03:00 PM

    The depth in this is astounding Tim, it reaches inside me to touch and feel the awesome message you deliver. I know that section of scripture and you enlarge it with grace. Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 5:24:00 PM

    what an amazing story Tim, sheer magic,, wish i was there,,,

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 8:09:00 AM

    Absolutely stunning Tim....when you get to that quiet place away from everywhere when you can't see a man made light or hear the noise it is like this...just like in the beginning. ....Donna

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 7:22:00 AM

    Tim, deep and profound writing, written like a true storyteller, memories, dreams visions, beliefs entwined, well done, constance

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 6:19:00 AM

    Excellent. Well expressed poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 11:31:00 PM

    Tim, this poem is such an enjoyable and exciting read for me. I absolutely love(yes, love :D)the 3 middle stanzas beginning with: Flash.(the entire poem is wonderful, it's just those 3 middle stanzas are enchanting to me). "No future, no past, only the Now/ Only the perfect and eternal Present..." -- "It seems.../ good and evil and all in between are no more/ because there is no thought or opinion" -- Yes!(try wrapping our brains around those possible conundrums a few thousand times, eh?).

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 6:21:00 PM

    Sometimes I am jealous of folks who feel this way [the thoughts you express in your verse] and other times I'm afraid for you [as you must be for me knowing I don't believe as you do] ahhh well, No no no Tim [you only make me happy!] I'm still here for you I have just been trying to write for some magazines and it's taking time away from here! [I'll be in shock if anyone takes the poems!]

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 5:23:00 PM

    Beautiful poem Tim. A child exists within us all. Wishing you a wonderful weekend. Hugs and love, Gail