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Jealous Beast

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Jealous Beast

When it comes to the vacuum cleaner
my dog is a jealous beast,
showing off his fangs and claws.
Does he not know that I'd feed
my Oreck less if he, now and then, but
wiped his paws?

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  1. Date: 9/19/2013 4:25:00 PM
    too funny and good, congrats to you ;}

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 11:27:00 AM
    Big congrats on your my friend, Timothy... Well done~A.O

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:54:00 PM
    Many congrats my dear friend Timothy! This is indeed great and amazing ! I love it & so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and the smiles here! Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 4/20/2013 4:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for stopping by... glad you could read and enjoy :)
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:51:00 PM
    Hello Timothy, Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 4/20/2013 4:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda... always so kind!
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 8:40:00 PM
    Timothy, a sweet win~*~SKAT

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 4/20/2013 4:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm happy I made it on her list! And thanks again for checking me out!
  1. Date: 3/19/2013 5:16:00 PM
    LOL, i like that you called my poem 'raunchy' .. anyways... I never meet a dog that enjoys the vacuum. I think the noise bothers their sensitive hearing. have you ever seen a cat react to a vacuum... funny ending... always~ LINDA

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/19/2013 5:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Haha... is raunchy an odd word to use? But I would like to see what happens to that poor cat... pets can be funny sometimes :)
  1. Date: 3/18/2013 10:07:00 PM
    Cute! I just love inspirations from pets and other simplicity of life. Another great one! Always, Laura

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/18/2013 11:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My black pomeranian inspires a lot of poetry from me :)
  1. Date: 3/18/2013 2:17:00 PM
    hmm, why didn't I fave this one yet? I love it.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/18/2013 8:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I just recently found out about "faving poems"... I will have to remember that!
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 6:21:00 PM
    !!!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/17/2013 10:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :)
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 12:56:00 AM
    oh my this is good. Let me see one more and see if you continue with gold!!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/17/2013 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your comments are always so uplifting! Thank you!
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 6:39:00 PM
    Isn't that the truth. This is such and insightful write. It'd also be a bonus if our dogs brushed their hair outside once in awhile too.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/16/2013 8:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    or used their own doggy bags to clean up their own mess.... wouldn't that be nice? An owner can dream though... haha...
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 5:40:00 PM
    I can just see him growling.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/16/2013 8:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My dog doesn't do this anymore (my house has all wood flooring)... but it was pretty fun seeing his reaction to the Roomba I got my mom for her birthday! He was pretty scared of the thing...
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 3:21:00 PM
    Love this Timothy... Patrick

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/16/2013 8:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Patrick! Very kind of you stop by...