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  1. Date: 9/12/2013 9:41:00 PM
    haha, I can't believe you liked it... I did not put any effort in to it. I was showing you how bad I did... you made me smile, ... if you really think it was good I will go with it. thanks... always~ Linda

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 7:13:00 AM
    Hi, ha yesterday morning I was on a roll. I drank a red bull. and accomplish work and the soup... hehehe.. That is why I love my job, other days it's only one or the other. It's early, about eightish on a Saturday. And I'm glad you found your way here.. or else I'd be bored... we are slow on Saturdays.. everyones asleep... but me.. :-)

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:22:00 AM
    soup mail

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 6:42:00 PM
    We won't know. We need to follow our heart. Best advice came from Jiminy Cricket. "Always let your conscience be your guide."

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 2:23:00 AM
    This os my favourite of yours so far and so going to my favs : )

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 9:36:00 PM
    I just love you work. I can read this over and over.

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 11:38:00 AM
    I AM ADDING THIS TO MY FAVORITES!! And you to my favorite poets list! This piece is too brilliant for words to describe, so I will just leave it at this: You are an AMAZING, absolutely amazing poet!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 4:11:00 AM
    Wow, the face of a killer, an amazing subject Marlon, and how you have written this comes across so clear you really do make the reader ponder on this, and give one so many different aspects. to think about

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 8:07:00 AM
    Well written and just shows the deepness of your soul to write in this style... very good.. Michael

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 10:11:00 PM
    I like this piece.It has a touch of irony embedded in it.

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 6:53:00 PM
    wow... Scribe, this poem can come in handy,,, my daughter is reading books about a killers mind.. i do not like it... it creeps me out...but she said she learned on how and what they prey... however... thou shall not K!ll.... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 1:49:00 PM
    Interesting indeed Scribe, to consider that the victim makes the killer - the concluding statement in this write is a great summation of predatory desire - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 1:42:00 AM
    Deep' Sandyivy

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 1:27:00 PM
    This is sooo true excellent burner. I love your word play. And yes everyone accepts things differently.

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 1:51:00 PM
    Wow--provocative, dangerous! Love it! Really gave me the thought, I need to be more aware. . . you never know... keep up the great work. You never fail to impress me with your poetry. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 8:47:00 AM
    Great poem Marlon; Looks can be deciving. That's what I mean when I say - this life is a masquerade. Thanks for reading my poem. It is also in English. The first poems That I wrote. ( A Daily Consumed Society ) I change the title In Spanish. ( Sociedad De Consumo A Diario). I think that's better. Como esta tu familia? Espero bien. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 7:16:00 AM
    Honestly I think you hit the nail right in the head here!!!! So many things even hidden things forget the go to jail things happen especially to children by people you would think squeaky this.......fav....donna

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:28:00 PM
    ..... where did this idea come from , Marlon ..... - A humanlike monster .... (?) - Well written! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)