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I Promise

I promised myself happiness, though I am been held as a sorry sorrowful soul I am tamed and hated, stamped and not heard, am living the agony of my life.  Hope I shall never lose for my faith is my believe, as am I looking forward to making it happen for me . As it’s been said that believing is the right motivation to success, so am I proud of been who I am, a dreamer I might be but am not hopeless nor hasty in anyway as time is justice meanwhile often the goal is nearer than It seems to a faint and faltering man. I believe a day will reborn for my call and manipulate every evil bound set against the will of destiny, a day that victory will be manifested as I rejoice to my faith accepting.  When things go wrong, as they sometimes have to When the road you're trudging seems all rocky and uphill When the funds are low and the debts are high and you want to smile, but you have to sigh. When care is pressing you down a bit rest if you must, but promising never to quit., to find the true facts of the unbridled love the reason behind the whole apathies. It might seem too much the whole programme am willing to take on my behave but not ego centric. A promise that have been made needs to be fulfilled so are the rules and so shall it be in my case. What is an emotion, first i invested so much time trying to understand the cruelty and the habits of life then took the huge step to work on my dreams and my feature it helps enormously towards reaching ones goals. I promise myself better days to come. 

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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 5:00:00 PM

    Betty, this is beautiful. Keep writing, I find it helps me cope with life. Welcome to the Soup. Rick

    njie Avatar betty njie Date: 3/23/2013 4:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Rick.... i definately will.. thnx for the motivation.
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 2:26:00 PM

    Betty, it sounds as though you have plenty of pain to write about but you're on the right road to success by sharing it with others. (Like those of us here in "PS"). I enjoyed reading this because you've given me a new perspective on life which makes me a little more open to the pain and suffering (and the joys & Happiness) of others. NEVER STOP WRITING! You have plenty of meaningful thoughts to share. Take care, Terry

    njie Avatar betty njie Date: 3/23/2013 4:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    am totally out of WORDS thnx so much i didnt expect such a great comment as am just a hobby writer not that perfect poet..... Thnx Terry
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 7:00:00 AM

    beautifully said

    njie Avatar betty njie Date: 3/23/2013 4:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you moses