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  1. Date: 1/29/2014 5:26:00 PM
    What beautiful moment when a thought shed that shell and bloom. Lovely David.

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 8:40:00 PM
    Hmm. Nice way to end my days reading. Thanks for this image, John.

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 11:40:00 PM
    Nice one D. Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 1:19:00 PM
    if u keep on seeing from negative side, it will develop sadness. True word, it is uneasy to be done but doable :) Nicely penned!

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 7:10:00 AM
    Oh, good "Karma" for sure! Nicely composed, David, and so very true. Keep well......Mikki :)

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 11:44:00 AM
    I loooooooove the first two lines of this. Beauty does have a way of absorbing the mind and soul. Well done, David. Hugs :)

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 4:28:00 PM
    You bring out the imagery of the message in a vivid way. Great.

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 9:51:00 AM
    I really liked the imagery of this, David...I wish I could be there one day..that's my goal for now...Thanks for your comments..xx Holly (email later)

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 8:47:00 AM
    A pearl form the shell stayed my poet brother and it is you.... Michael

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 3:36:00 AM
    solitude is good for the soul, empty places fill the whole:) well done mate...

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 2:11:00 AM
    Hi David how apt love this, soupmail, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 9:40:00 PM
    wow.. wow...Tex... ;-)

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 11:52:00 PM
    Nicely done, David. yes, I know your feeling on having problems being here often. It's become a struggle for me as well. I need more hours in my day.

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 7:31:00 AM
    Well Mr. Williams...Gotta let this baby soak in for an hour or two (sign of a good poem) You are on a roll sir - Tim

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 6:26:00 AM
    I imagine it would. Nicley done, David.

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 8:13:00 PM
    Well done David

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 5:32:00 PM
    thrives in your poetry as well David..

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 10:30:00 AM
    love this one, David - congrats on your wins too : )

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 7:34:00 AM
    David, a beautiful Tanka, well done, Constance

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 9:47:00 PM
    Is that the special feeling I feel when I pick them up to take home? Great David