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Washed Away

That new wave of love...... 
                              has washed away my name.........
                                                                    from the sand of your heart......

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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 10:31:00 PM

    Short, sweet, and wonderfully written

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 3/22/2013 10:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Joanna! :)
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 1:34:00 PM

    Stunning!! Love your poem Eileen. Hugs and luv, Gail

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 3/17/2013 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Gail. Sweet of you! Hugs!
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 1:47:00 PM

    Uniquely presented, Teach! Very creative... hugs, your friend Jack xox

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 3/17/2013 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Like being called TEACH! Good one, Jack! Any good teachers that have left an impression on ya? Had a crush on any? Hmmmm something to think and write about, eh?
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 7:11:00 AM

    This is quite the visual. Well done. Have a great day Eileen

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 3/17/2013 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Richard! :) You too! Hope all is well, my dear.
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 6:36:00 PM

    awww. what a wonderful image, though!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 3/17/2013 1:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hugs, Ilene! My way of saying...thanks! :)
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:28:00 PM

    Nice analogy, sad but there are prettier beaches out there. This one is going to my fav's...-R

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 3/17/2013 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh WOW! Thanks, Raul! Yes...good to know there are other beaches out there! :)