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Haiku 7

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Haiku 7

brand new flat screen -
and they play
with the bubble wrap

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  1. Date: 3/19/2013 4:18:00 PM
    he he he...that is me- and every other kid... I like the enjoyment of popping the bubble wraps, before i toss them in the trash. Timothy, our flat screen tv's come protected by foam... the white one... anyways~ love the haiku...pd

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/19/2013 4:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I honestly don't know anyone that doesn't like popping those bubbles at least slightly... it's just such a universal thing...
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 1:52:00 PM
    Bubble wrap is fun..Enjoyed reading this one..Got a chuckle..Thanks for the kind reviews..I like those buzzards..Sara

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/17/2013 10:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    So happy to make someone laugh... have a great day Sara!
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 10:04:00 AM
    We all have popped that bubble wrap I'm sure! One of the simple joys in life! Great haiku... I await number eight (poetic)! Cheers!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/16/2013 2:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I shall try my best to meet expectations... lol. Appreciate you reading and giving me your thoughts!
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 8:24:00 AM
    Yes it is always fun to play with those bubble, u just cant stop until all popped. Thi one flows fluently. Thanks fo ur appreciation, Timothy. I couldnt ask for more :)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/16/2013 2:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Pop! Pop! Pop! :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 6:36:00 AM
    I like the way you took the haiku away from the traditional method and made it more modern and personal. I think that is a wonderful perk of poetic license, even for something as honored and ancient as the haiku form. Well done.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/16/2013 2:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jeremy! Traditional haiku demands you reference nature at some point, but I don't like that restriction... haiku for me is about capturing little moments in everyday life and making them feel a little more significant...
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 4:41:00 PM
    Thanks everyone! I always remember how fun it was popping all those little bubbles, lol...

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 2:22:00 PM
    Thanks for number 7 .... wait for number 8 ..... lol - Have a beautiful weekend, Timothy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 2:37:00 AM
    That is true, this one made me chuckle.

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 1:05:00 AM
    hahaha. this is adorable.