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kiss of sunshine

I am a grand yellow flower
Feeling so forlorn
Jack Frost just nipped me
Now I am bent and torn
My head is flopping over
No strength in my stem
Need a little bit of sun
To warm the chill within
What’s that I see above me
I am sure I saw the sun
Here I am, here I am, I shout
Kissing will be fun
I smile now as my head lifts
No longer bent that’s good
Been kissed by the sun all day
No longer need plant food
What is my name I am asking
Lifting my sun kissed head to you
I am the pride of Wales
A smiling daffodil that’s true.

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  1. Date: 4/10/2013 6:58:00 PM

    Superb job, great write. Keep up the good work, I love your poetry.

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 4:30:00 AM

    I think I'm reading another poem with double meaning here. I could be wrong, but the words flow so well. Great work either way.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 3/15/2013 12:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    glad you enjoyed it Wayland...Seren
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 3:26:00 AM

    Just wonderful, Seren...Love the way you make the daffodil come alive and talk...'Jack Frost just nipped me'...Perfect - Tim

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 3/15/2013 12:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol thanks Tim...Seren
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 11:57:00 PM

    this is adorable, Seren!!! Love it. and your avatar too!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 3/15/2013 12:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Andrea,thought writing from the flowers point of view would be different. Thanks for the comment.....Seren
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 9:26:00 PM

    Awesome description...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 3/15/2013 12:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Victor, thank you for stopping by....Seren
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 2:57:00 PM

    Great work describing the Daffodil..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 3/14/2013 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Sara, i enjoyed writing it ...Seren
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 2:08:00 PM

    Clap clap clap, bravo! I like your take on the contest.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 3/14/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    do i get 3 hip hip Hoorays as well, lol me cheeky now ...Seren
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 12:59:00 PM

    And what a lovely little daff you are , love it and we could do with some of that sun here , my daffs have still got scarves around their heads as they have kept their greenery underground xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 3/14/2013 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    mine are showing there heads but the frost isnt doing them much good....Seren
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 12:29:00 PM

    This is truly beautiful and wondrous my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this afternoon my friend! I enjoyed the sunshine within your write! What an awesome piece, quite the amazing poem, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 3/14/2013 4:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Russell, glad you enjoyed it....Seren
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 12:29:00 PM

    Love your new pic... think I told you before but I'm telling you again! What a sweet poem, dear Seren! Hugs... xoxoxox

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 3/14/2013 4:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the pic comment.. glad you liked the silly poem....hmmm maybe you will write about a shy daffodil jack....Seren
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 12:22:00 PM

    What a fun upbeat poem... the kiss of sun is wonderful for humans and nature.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 3/14/2013 4:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Debra, thanks for stopping by....Seren