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Delicate whisper

Delicate whisper

Delicate  whisper  is brought 
by the favourable wind 
from the greatest of all breezes

I lend my ears
To the whisper
from the land of love
where my bosom love for ever 
dwells

The brightest of a divine whisper
grips me when am in the 
tight tentacles of my dreams
let me absorb 
your whisper sensuality
let me absorb
your tender love

I get my new world
of timeless longevity 
as I feel
and breath in your whisper

vibrate my heart 
with your divine fragrance
hug me tight 
with you delicate whisper

~ sukmawati komala~
14 March 2013

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  1. Date: 3/29/2013 5:47:00 PM
    nicely done my dear,,,, coming by to wish you a blessed Easter Sunday ;}

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 7:15:00 PM
    Hello darling, you have such a light touch with your pen. Words you write seem to dance off the page and give the reader a moment of delight. Loved to read this gem! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 6:17:00 AM
    Excellent. Beautifully penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 1:53:00 PM
    This is so beautifully written, my dear Sukmawati! A sweet expression of love! Big hugs dear friend, Jack xox

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 3:02:00 AM
    Whew! - This one made got my heart pounding my friend!...'tight tentacles of my dreams'....WOW - Tim

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 7:47:00 AM
    Words like soft down in a beautiful poem Sukmawati! - Love it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)